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for Painful Reminder

by Mustang

person Lovers-For-Eternity
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Awsome story...Really good...
person Suikidoen
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great except for the kikyo hand job thing >.> i nearly barfed at that BLEH other than that i loved it if ur not gonna continue at liest give us a epologe of some sort
person BastardOmega
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was greate NOW u shud add a lemon soo the story will belong on aff. I want somthing happening and it got to be dirty noty love making.hehehe

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person kagome1312
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!
person Mustang
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sry that was the last chapter.... lol dont wanna drag it out :)
person LdyMoon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, I enjoyed it. I'm glad that Inuyasha wasn't too badly hurt or else our favorite hanyou would be well...for lack of better words...impotent. It was pretty amusing as well, I loved the part where Sango and Miroku were arguing and he said she farted I giggled. That was funny. And then he had poo poo stains, yeah, I bet inu was cracking up, I was too.
person Josh
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but hope everything goes back to normal in some way but I hope Inuyasha gets his senses back and tell Kikyou to go off and stay away but I think he wants her to keep going on but Kagome is going to be pissed at him hope to see an update soon
person The author
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o come on its generally about kagome/inuyasha dont have to take it sooo literally...this is all just for fun :)
person Julie
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea loved it.. are you joking me.. you do realize that you wrote this in the Kagome/Inuyasha section right??? when people write in this section its usually Kagome/Inuyasha parings not Inuyasha getting blown by kikio and HATING kagome.. I'm sure that absolutly EVERYONE just LOVED this chapter! O YEA
person Sam
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but I didn't really like the chapter. The fighting between Sango and Miroku was intended to be cute but really wasnt.. it was childish and not in a good way.. If I were Kagome I would be feeling some serious guilt about everything from hurting him to breaking the jewel.. So I would give the shards to Sango and go down the well saying that she understands that Inuyasha doesnt want her around and will respect that. *she is going to wait in her time for Inuyasha to get his head out of his ass* and WOW Sango is a bitch this is all her falt yet she is taking none of the blame..