rate_review Reviews

this is just a wonderful story although the chappies are a bit short. good work. update soon

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! How could u...it was getting good...hehe...anyways...keep updating alrighty!

OOO I feel SOO privledged that I was mentioned in an authors note. It was actually my first time on this board. .well in a good way.. there was this author who had it out for me the first review.. because I like knowing whats going to happen but I dont know so I make those little guesses and theorys right most people are ok with it well she wasnt.. but thats a story for another day. I just feel so happy inside :) I am kinda sad that my theory was wrong but hey no harm done its not the first time I was wrong.. I will eventually get over my wound. J/k no but wow that was his wife.. and the general was flirting with her.. did he by any chance touch her??? I read this story ok I have read alot of storys where fluffy will kick some serious ass because people lay a finger on rin or kagome *not mated but she is to inuyasha* and he is all "NEVER TOUCH AN INU-YOUKI MATE" and with the groweling.. but yea it was a really good chapter a little short but HEY it was an update right?

How could you do that!!!!! and right at the good part. I thought he was going to take her on the floor in the hallway. I couldn't believe that you stopped a major lemon right there , that's not right ( crying and stomping like a baby) Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please update the suspense is going to drive me nuts I want to find out if her pushes her against the wall or something. Please anything a sample ANYTHING PLEASE........really good update soon.. ^________________________^

Cool story! it's really good! i hope you update soon.

Alrighty then. I shall take that reveiw challenge. But, you are so far behind it's not funny. LOL. Cause you see... I already have a chapter nearly done. So, get on with it. Update soon.

Alala

Oh your just so mean lol:) Hope to read more soon.

hehehe...didn t you say I would love your story...well as always your right. You know me very good...well see ya next chapt

So what I'm assuming is that Fluffy wants her.. she wants him.. but he wont make her his 'official mate' because she is human.. and he SWARES that he is only feeling lust but anyone reading this knows its more than that but he just cant catch the drift.. So when they travel to keades village rin tells kagome of this little problem.. she is really hurt you know the one she loves and the one she gave herself to doesnt feel those same feelings.. so kagome tells her to make him jelous show him that the little get-togethers can end just as fast as they started.. because he doesnt want her doesnt mean that others dont.. so that leads us to this chapter with what has been going on and yea.. that is my feable guess as to what you are thinking about the story. :)

wow...that was good...damn but a cliff hanger...r u serious...but dat was very good...can't wait until the next chapter but hurry because I can't wait forever but I probably will!