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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glares at her comp screen with an intense desire to blow the damn thing to a million tiny peices and send them to TUMBUCK2!!!!!!!!!!!!!* "pant pant" that was cruel worse then burying a dead person bringing them back to life then telling them they have to go back into the dark cold scary GRAVE PIT with the fat dude from viva la bam! *sniffles* fine be that way tear the very fabric of my heart out and stomp on it and use my tears to wipe it up. but if not be nice and update^.^ ByTheWay rin is a lil sex vixen and should be locked up and hidden so all the rest of us have a lick of a chance at being so ellusive and damned desirable and SESSHOUMARU *underline underline* is a damn sexi beast who should be handcuffed to the bed and never let go *coughlikejohnnydeppisonminecough* so hurry up and tie the damn drool worthy dude up!! <333333333 xoxoxox ur fan sexi cincin
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rushie, you better not quit. Or I'll hunt you down with a pitch fork and extend my Trysted sense of judgement over it... LOL. Ummm, yeah.
Now, about your fic...
That is evil. You always manage to cut off just at the good points. Mmmmmm. Well, here's another thing, You rushed the beta job on this. It's all in all a good fic. But there's several spelling errors.
And what the heck?!
Rin thought Sesshomaru was cheating on her? What an idgit. As for Rin, she's more guilty of that then him. Sheesh. LOL.
Anyway, where the heck is my review for PMS? Huh?! Grrrrrrrrr. You are falling further behind....
Alala
Now, about your fic...
That is evil. You always manage to cut off just at the good points. Mmmmmm. Well, here's another thing, You rushed the beta job on this. It's all in all a good fic. But there's several spelling errors.
And what the heck?!
Rin thought Sesshomaru was cheating on her? What an idgit. As for Rin, she's more guilty of that then him. Sheesh. LOL.
Anyway, where the heck is my review for PMS? Huh?! Grrrrrrrrr. You are falling further behind....
Alala
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you write...!! and I also like the titles of the chapters (although I don´t really know why...but I think its better than to only write `chapter1`, `chapter2` and so on...)
I hope there will be a new chapter soon!
I hope there will be a new chapter soon!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello Rushie... You missed one. Sure, you got the Ridi update, but what about the chapter 9 of PMS? Hmmmm. You caught 8.... but not nine. After all... This puts you REALLY far behind. LOL.
Alala/Tryst/AlalaMoonTryst... Yeah... I have other author names... Though, the Tryst ones are a bit more tilted to another grouping. :-D Told you I have more fics than you can possibley understand.
Alala/Tryst/AlalaMoonTryst... Yeah... I have other author names... Though, the Tryst ones are a bit more tilted to another grouping. :-D Told you I have more fics than you can possibley understand.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a shocker.. that little imputent basterd cheating on Rin. GRRRRR... I could castrait him right now :( But good come back little Rin * Snaps for Rin* I'm sorry if my review is boring :( But my brother-in-law died a couple days ago and I am having a hard time with it.. but reading these storys makes me happy. O btw 31 everytime I write that he died the author asks how old so there you go 31.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Please write more.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a interesting turn of events....... So they together but not together????!!!!!f... Well I know you will explain everything later.........I just have to wait....
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Har de har har. That was a good one. Lol. Little maid? A whore? Are these two in love or is there some kind of unresolved issue? Wow. Lol. But I should warn you... I have several fics I have yet to finish posting. As they say, don't count your chickens before they hatch. Keep your eyes on Ridiculous... after all... It is complete.
:-D
Alala
:-D
Alala
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how can you stop the chapter at this point!!? It´s unfair...I want to read more!!! So please update!!^^