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for What Lurks Beneath

by Roushijin

person Beenie
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Cassie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you do this again that's really mean of you to do right at the lemmony part too!!!!!!!!! Could you please get on with the lemmony sex scene because if I see another shocking short cliffy I'm going to pull my hair out ppppppllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeee update..... really gooooooooooood story keep up the good work.......^________________^
person sesshou-chan788
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, im a newcomer in here. Maybe i dont know many beautiful words to say, but i really love your stories,this one and the other named "his lost bride". Im just afraid that you wont reply my compliments, but i really want to make friend with you, can you give me your Y!M? When i went to this website, i have always looked for your stories first. The way you write make me feel a little different with other stories i have read, so i love your stories very much. Please write more chapters, i hope to read it soon.
person Ana
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. UPDATE SOON!
person Sam
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG thank you SOO much.. You just went up like fifty knotches on my people I love list.. Yes and it was a very very good chapter YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY He didnt cheat on her!!!!!
person sauncha
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! Getting close to the lemon it looks like.
person blue
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is plain... AMAZIIIING!!! i know u just updated yesterday, but PLEASE update asap! its sooo great right now. and ur cliffs are KILLERS! i just finished reading all of the chapters, and they had me HOOKED! please continue continue continue!!!
person Inu_Twins
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was nice!! Plz Update ASAP!! Intense and those cliffs are very deadly!! I wouldn't want to fall off of one them!!So...um...Update ASAP so u don't get in trouble for killing someone!! But u would never do that....or would U...I am joking...^-^ seriously!!

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person samantha [not signed in]
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
upddate update update! this was great. now please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next.
person diego
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he,he,he... I forgot how good you are...why do you alway cut in the good moments...that is really mean...and that is one more punishimens...well see ya later...and this time im going to kick your ass