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for What Lurks Beneath

by Roushijin

person Kanameko
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this!It is very well written and is well worded.I cannot wait until the next chapter!
person sesshouaru
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wench! you beter fix that little diease you have for this sesshoumaru wants to know what happens next
person Romance/Alala Moon/ You know the rest
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You.... You... You... You made me cry.

Bad little author. Short chapters are forbidden. Come on... I'm pounding my key board day in day out to give a decent update and you give us this?! Why?! Huh? Why do you do this? By the way, this is my reaction to a short chapter. >:( You make me sooooo sad!


Update! With something much longer. I love your fics, Rushie. Why do you do this? Just for that, I shall write something truly horrifying. And it's your fault. I might just kill Sessy for this! Bad! Come back and make this chapter longer. More!!!!! We demand more!


Hehehehe. by the way, I have another update coming. Hope you got one ready.


Romance of the Moon
person adea neri
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update i love this fanfic. WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
person kitkat
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great cliffhanger, when do you drop the other shoe so we can read what happened next?

Keep up he great work
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffels* i come back from vacation and u do this to me!!!!!!! fine be that way *pouts and goes to her corner* so so so so so so so so o o o so not fair! we were this close ppl <---> now tell me is that not soul crushin or what!?!?! nooooo hes soooo damn sexi and make ya just wanna mmmmmhmmm and yet u yank it all away and leave us sittin there bashin our heads against the keyboard *that hurts by the way* haha well i loved the chapters and im glad to be home again ^.^, keep up the good work, although the at guy in the grave from viva la bam looks loney i think ill join him =P CUZ IM KILLIN LONLINESS!!!!!!
person CinCin
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o yeah the reveiw be4 this was me ^.^ hehe glad to be bck!
person diego
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck...I hate you...how dare you make a chapter so small...you ..if i get my hands on you...you will pay...anyway it great so keep write...before i have to force you!!!
person Ana
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had better make up for this chapter with the next one! UPDATE VERY SOON!
person Sam
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O My Dear Lord. That was like four paragraphs of real writting. Four SMALL paragraphs of real writing.. ummmm at least you updated!!!!! I liked the chapter though.. I was still really shocked that fluffy would cheat but HE DIDNT YAAAYY *throws confeddi and dances a strange little dance around a campfire*