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for What Lurks Beneath

by Roushijin

schedule June 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Please write more soon; don’t leave me hanging!!!

person sdfsf
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
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person Rachel
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok you have GOT to finish this dammit lmao!! this is good..very good!
person LadyRin
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good write more soon please.
person adeaneri
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooohooo an update?????? i cant wait to read this.......... welcome back.
person Tats
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG The Tenison is Killing Me
person animegirl007
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!! You have never disappointed me yet.....I can't wait to read this lemon....my mouth is watering just thinking about it ....
person amhor56
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have me at the edge. Another chapter without a lemon, and I will fall off and die instead of soaring through the skies. Hey! If you want, you could even use that in your lemon. Just give me one soon please. Update as quick as you can. Great story. One of two spelling errors and the tense is wrong in this paragraph. "...learning[I think you meant 'leaning'] up she went to kiss him, but he moved his head way from her seeking lips. A cute pout reached her face as she looks[the tense you're writing in would make this 'looked'] as though she was about to cry." Sorry, had to point that out to you. It's an important paragraph. About the second from the bottom. Once again great job and update soon!
person Midnight Star
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just re read some of your fics and still love them. I think in the fic, you should have Rin pregant. Then Sess wouldn't have to worry about anyone looking at his wife/mate.
person Angelica
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. keep up the good work