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for The white devils bride

by Webglam

schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You craft a wondrous story with excellence and creativity and the added attraction of mystery and magic. I truly enjoy facets of the supernatural that permeate this delightfully dark fantasy.
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here.....
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...are...
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...your...
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...four reviews!....

~_^
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*winks deviously* Now will you put the next chapter up sweetpea? You have me enthralled. I love the way that you have written this. I am unsure if this is the way you wanted to write it or if it is just your style...~aka~... short and sweet.

I love a hot, dark fic... the darker and more twisted the better, especially if there is a truly devious plot involved. As I can see, there is... does my memory serve me correctly or is Demonia a realm of hell in Lady Death? I think I may have induced too many illicit substances along the way, as my memory farts along as it pleases. If not, then I must say that your writing has invoked a truly amazing peek from the dark shadowy depths of my mind, as to what this 'Demonia' place looks like. In my mind it is very similar to the realm in Lady Death... either ways, this story has enormous potential... please continue ~_^