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for To Be Alive Again

by SayuriNakamura

person madmiko
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful!! I love the way you are advancing the relationships. I know you said this would be a Yuuske/Kagome pairing, potentially Hiei/Kagome/Yuuske, but you brought out the Hiei/Kagome part so beautifully that I must beg you not to drop it. Do you plan to incorporate some action/adventure or just focus on a character-driven plot? No matter which way you go, I'll be anxiously awaiting future chapter!!
person Angelwings
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love this Story ^^ So Please update soon ^^
person Bree McGregor
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I like it Please write more!! I always loved Hiei
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Reality Bites Deal With It
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unless Anon wants to provide specific instances where ideas were taken I don't see where they have any business posting such a review. Most stories out there regardless of genre have common threads, be it settings, conversations, or sequences of events i.e. timelines. Unless something was taken word for word or with such blantant similarity that there is no denying that it was "lifted" from another story then I don't see what the problem is but we can't judge for ourselves if examples aren't given. To the author, I do hope you don't let the one review get you down and you continue to update this along with your other stories. You are a very talented author.
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know...I like the story...but I am sure I have seen a few of your ideas in two other fics...that were written before this one was...maybe you should look over them and credit the original author for the ideas?
person tru
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!! I never saw the whole y\Yuske Keiko twist coming. Please UPDATE SOON. THANKS FOR SHARING A WONDERFUL IDEA.
person Shivers
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.. I really love this one. Kagome and Yuusuke are my favorite pairing. With Hiei thats another plus. Please update soon..*_*
person Ryukotsusei
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know.. I never have cared for Houjo. Someone that perfect is just too damned good to be true. I hope Keiko realizes the seriousness of what she has done. What bothers me is that the other girls knew about what was going on. I'd be ready to thrash the lot of them at this point. I loved the interaction between Kagome and Yukina, as well as Hiei's reactions to the situation. Good chapter as always, I look forward to reading more. Update soon please
person Shivers
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I like it. Update soon..