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for To Be Alive Again

by SayuriNakamura

person madmiko
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Such a sweet chapter. I like the way Yusuke and Hiei tried to comfort her when she told them about her friends. The threesome set-up is awesome! Yusuke and Hiei seem to really be working together to help her. Loved the part about Koenma's visit. He's attracted to her, too, huh? Well, he'll have to get in line. Wonder where Hiei was when Koenma came? He's not going to be too happy about the news, is he? That was a nice evening Kagome and Yusuke spent together. I hope she gets to spend some time with Hiei, too. I've got to go back and re-read this story now to refresh my memory on everything. I love it that you've made Kagome wise enough to think the way she does about Hiei and Yusuke, and even about Inuyasha. She's sad, but she'll get over it. (Who wouldn't with those to help?) Loving it!!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet fluffy goodness!!

happy healthy update reward/bribe (to continue)

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

thank you,
ginny
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you have really caught my interest. I hope tp see more of this story, I thin Hiei And Yusuke make a great team, lucky Kagome! Any way keep up the good work. Legilmyth
person madmiko
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, YES!! I was SO Thrilled to see this story updated!! I love it!! I've loved it from the very first chapter. You have set up an incredible storyline for a Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke pairing. (Hiei/Kagome is my personal favorite, but I don't mind it when another SD is thrown into the mix -- Yusuke or Kurama, of course.) This was such a great chapter, picking right up from where it left off. Love Kagome's continued thoughts, sadness, fears, etc. over her friends and inuyasha and the way she left. I really can't wait to see what happened to them. (I'm pretty sure you're going to tell that eventually, right?) And the way she has bonded with Hiei and Yusuke both is SO believable -- it's incredibly well-done. I loved what she said about Hiei to Yusuke, and I loved Hiei's thoughts about trusting Yusuke as a friend and teammate. (Earlier chapter, I think.) Thank you so much for continuing this story!! I beg of you to update again SOON!! Is this on MM? Because I'd love to get an alert for updates. My e-mail is: kellyhorrell@juno.com
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dances happy Sayuri-chan dance!*

i love it when an author updates a good story! i'm glad you're developing their friendship, getting to know eachother... i like the interactions.

thank you,
ginny
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a good story, i am intrigued and i want to read more. your writing is intelligent, entertaining and eloquent, it is a pleasure to read... this is motivation to read the rest of your work as time permits.

i am looking forward to future installments of this story and to it's completion (hint hint) =P

thank you,
ginny
person ptbear
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to see how they work it out. Keep it as Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei, think it works well with the story line.
person madmiko
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well-written! And I'm still waiting and hoping for more! Kagome's just such a good match with the YuYu guys. (Especially Hei, but I'm becoming a Yuske fan, too -- especially when Hiei isn't left out!) More please!!
person Melissa
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please continue with it. I've enjoyed all your stories so far.
person Xaxy
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Death to Keyko(sp.)...Blah!!! I hope you up date this story I love the interaction that Hie/Kagome/Yusuke have >.<