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for To Be Alive Again

by SayuriNakamura

schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it please update this soon
person madmiko
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just had to start reading through this one again, -- I just love it so much! And when I'm done, I'm going to go back through "Searching for Shelter," too. LOL!! I know how busy life can be, but I sure hope you will be able to write some more for these fabulous stories. They are definitely among the best of the IY/YYH fics, and there are just way too few of them. I'm doing my best to add to the field, but I'm afraid my offerings are nowhere near the quality of yours. LOL! Just wanted to let you know that these are still some of my all-time faves, and that I'll still be here, waiting patiently, whenever you get back to them. ^_^
person Maru
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
person Maru
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
person madmiko
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such a NICE chapter! Loved it! But you sure know how to make things difficult for your readers -- now there are FOUR fabulous guys for Kagome. (FIVE, if you count Youko. Heh heh!) Seriously, you know me -- I'm all for Hiei, and Hiei/Kag/Yusuke is good, too. So, how did you mangage to make me feel sorry for Koenma, and make Kurama such a perfect match for her, too? *sigh* It's very disconcerting. LOL! But you spelled out their similarities so perfectly, I just couldn't help but go "Hmmmmm." I loved Genkai confronting Hiei and Yusuke, and pointing out to them why Kagome was so upset, AND the fact that she would be feeling torn between them, while THEY could choose to share her. And I really, really liked the way you wrote that it was obvious from their reaction to her words that they had both been considering that very possibility. And, you did such a great job of having Yusuke just say right out that he was willing to do it, while Hiei stubbornly refused to say it, --prefering to mention that they could fight it out, -- THEN telling Yusuke they should talk. That whole part was just wonderful. And, I'm guessing they already had their little talk when they started looking for her. Hmmm. so, what will their reaction be when they come across her with KURAMA? Hee hee!! *rubs hands together in anticipation* This is going to be GOOD!! I was really thrilled to see another chapter up for this -- it's one of the few stories I'm really following these days, since I've been spending so much time writing myself. I will be looking forward eagerly to your next update!!
person Patty530
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. It was wonderful. I look forward to the next update.
person Patty530
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you haven't given up on this. I just found it and loved every minute of it. So if you need encouragement to continue, you have it. Please.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really really loving this story. You had said that you didn't know whether you were going to make it a Yusuke/Hiei/Kagome or not, so here's my plea. YES, YES, YES... please ^^'. Keep up the great work, and I'm waiting expectently for the next chapter.
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a really great. i not normally fond of 3 way relationships but with this story i find myself really wanting it. you are doing a wonderful job with this and i cant wait to read more.
person madmiko
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous!! I loved Hiei's thoughts about her and the way he realized how very similar their situations and motivations actually are. And I loved the way Kagome told him how much she appreciated the little things he had done. This was a great two steps forward, one step back chapter. The wonderful, comapnionable time they spent together, followed by the mutual attraction and growing passion. And it all would have been smooth and great and positive, if Yusuke hadn't shown up when he did. And, perhaps, if Hiei had been able to keep the triumph he was feeling from showing. I think it was beautifully written, and you hit all the right notes. And now Hiei has faced his own yearnings and feelings and come to a decision. I do wonder how he is going to explain his reaction to Kagome. And Kagome has that "torn between two lovers" feeling ready to plague her. I feel sorry for Hiei, though, because he's misinterpreting her reaction. He needs to talk to her. And it looks like it may take a while for him and Yusuke to come to terms over her. Hmmm. I don't remember what the end situation was with Inuyasha, but I have to say, I hope she DOES see him again, with these two at her side. She deserves to have that kind of closure -- that kind of vindication. Nicely done!