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Great Story!! I love the movie Chicago!! Hurry and update when you can!!

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I have no idea why that took so long to post....it wasn't even a story chapter. It was just spaces, and song lyrics with a few descriptions and 1 or 2 small paragraphs. The other 2 chapters were good. The story (when you get to the parts in between the lyrics is good. Atleast warn people in the summary that it's a song fic..give us a choice in reading it. I prefer authors who just admit they had writers block.

I liked the show.. I liked it on chicago to. but it wasnt much of a chapter.

what the hell are u waiting for update plezz.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

hey i really like this story...and i hope you put up some new chaps....
can't wait for them...

O so Kagome had HoJo before Kinky-ho.. nice

Hey, ya need to write another chappie. It is really good and I would like to know what would happen next. Please update soon.

I loved this! I loved this! I loved this! Go Kagome!

This is cute so far, and as a fan of IY/Kag and present-day AU as well as Chicago, I'm enjoying the setting. Not sure where you're going to go with it in order to get the pair together, but I intend to come back for the next update. I do suggest trying to find a beta reader, if you can...that'll help you catch any pesky grammer/spelling errors/omissions and also any awkward dialogue or sentence structure, which makes it easier for readers to get inside your head--sometimes it's hard to envision exactly what the writer is picturing. A beta reader could also give you input on the formatting of your chapters (line and paragraph breaks), although I've heard that sometimes formatting for AFF is a pain. Extra line breaks between dialogue and paragraphs make it easier to distinguish changes in POV or speakers. I'm sure you knew that already, but when you're skimming something you wrote, sometimes you don't notice that stuff.

Anyway, keep it up! This is the first time I've ever read an IY fic with a musical in it let alone Chicago--and considering how sexy both Inuyasha and the entire Chicago show are, they were destined to meet!