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for Can't Run Forever

by YamisAkuchan

person Nekosune
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Awsome! Wai! Cookies and pocky for you! I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good, but some more description would be nice. It's good as it is but more depth would help it out. ^_^. Well can't wait for more.
person Koopasgurl
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting, I like the pairing I hope you write more soon
person Catgurl
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's very...intresting, keep it up
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now, this does look interesting sweetpea. I'm still kinda get used to Sesshoumaru being all meek and mild and fucked up over his mothers' murder, which I must add, was quite the dark twist... very good. I'm seeing it though... and I'm seeing it as having potential. Also sweetpea, is it Armani that you're looking for (as in the suits... good choice I must add, but I dunno about the fluffy tie ^_^)... very good first chapter though. Freakn' Inuyasha... rotten, thoughtless puppy! He needs to be taken too with a rolled up newspaper doesn't he? Fancy him not picking Sesshie up... and Sesshie skulking off to his room so he didn't have to get into a fight with Inuyasha... different but I liked it. I'm interested in seeing where you're going to take this fic sweetpea... *drools in contemplation...* especially with Kouga *melts*

Looking forward to an update k?

peace,

The Sinner ~_^
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PS... you have a great taste in yaoi husbands... Vegeta and Sesshoumaru *drowning on drool* Heheheh ~_^