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for Slave

by sadeness

person henna
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!

I love this story, it's so good.

I hope you update real soon!

=D
person Bondage-Lover
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH i love the story, please update really really soon PLEASE
person Ari
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa! dont end it there!!!
this is like the best story ever. The plot is very griping as well as the way you write
Please update soon
Ari
person memorietrail
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more
person Kags21
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha , what will Sesshoumaru do to him?
person little nikky
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) i love it
person skydreamer22
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story you have. I can't wait to read more so I hope you get the next chapters done soon.
person Gilgrissom
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you really kill the Bat Demon off?

I would like to know.
person Riley
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, I really enjoy it and hope you update soon.
Recently, I know this is very forward, I started writing an Original slash on a Geisha. Though it is male/male. I would love if you looked it over, seeing how you have based a story on the same thing. I am trying for historical accuracy and need feed back from somebody who knows something. I would be honoured if you contacted me at aprilmoffat14@hotmail.com if you are a mite interested.
thanks for you time,
Riley
person GrayWolf
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
these look good ^_^ i don't remember changing back the years and stuff... er... did you look that over?