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for Slave

by sadeness

person ardentes
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I really enjoyed it! There were parts that made me want to ball my eyes out but this was a fantastic, if not complicated, story.
person mamarita
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you were able to finish the story. I like that it took both brothers to finally defeat Naraku- as it should be. I look forward to your next story. DLS
person mamarita
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Thanks for the update- It's been so long and so refreshing. I'm not sure I think Sesshomaru would be uke even for 1 night with InuYasha, but it seemed to work, since the mating mark was finally placed on Sesshomaru. Now, to finally kill off Naraku and get the mating ceremony done. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DLS
person mamarita
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kami be praised!! Sesshomaru and InuYasha have found one another. Don't let anything else bad happen to the two, please!!!!!!!! I love this story! DLS
person mamarita
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while and I think we really NEED an update. It's about time that the 2 brothers get together and have some peace, please!
person mamarita
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the suspense is killing me, please update again, soon!
person mamarita
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Note: Sesshomaru should have been able to destroy Naraku in chapter 20- that was not reasonable to expect him to survive THAT attack, not from the inside out and not with Sesshomaru's sword's power.... On another note- excellent- now will you please let Sesshomaru find InuYasha and take him home?
person nm1716
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person mamarita
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for letting InuYasha get out of Naraku's castle- finally.. I know it isn't over yet, but OMFG!!! He is free from the constant physical torture! Now- will you let Sesshomaru find him and take care of him, please!!!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha. He suffers more and more by the chapter. I so love this story.