rate_review Reviews

Just because a fiction has been posted on this site, doesn't mean it needs a lemon. Adult material means many things, including the use of swear words, sexual scenes, or at least the implication of sexual interaction. The story is fine the way it is. Please continue and do not worry what others may say about your story. Being a veteran in the InuYasha community for over 5 years I conclude this story has more deph than most stories that include tons of lemons. I applaude your writing and keep up the great work.

Thats right stick up for ur Beliefs, in my opinion ur story is great without the porn in it. keep up the great work

I love your story. I am anxious to read the rest of it. Please post another chapter soon!!!

Please continue the story! It`s getting good! (chanting:lemon,lemon,lemon)

This is a great story. I really want to here more about Kin and Jiro. I want to see Inuyasha end up with someone other than Kikyo and be happy. I want to see Huro happy and content in life. I want to see everyone happy. Sorry I sound so demanding, but I really am invested in this story. You're a really good writer and deserved all those rewards. Keep it up.

I really like this & am looking forward to more. There is are a couple of goofs though, you're not using the word donning & in 1 case donned correctly, it means the act of putting something on more than wearing it or it had been put on, the 1st time you used donning in chapter 18, "Her eyes were worried, completely unaware of the danger present. She walked over to the Taiyoukai, still donning the borrowed haori, and put a hand on his forearm." wearing or clad in would be more appropriate & there's also donned in this spot, 2nd sentence from the end; "The Taiyoukai looked over her approvingly. Over the white kosode Kagome wore a teal uchikake with pink sakura petals embroidered at the hems of the sleeves and bottom. It was left open without any obi so that the white was visible and lay in high contrast to the beauty of the outer robe. Her hair had the forelocks taken back and tied in an elaborate knot at the back of her head. Her dark locks had been straightened out with a cast-iron plate and hung down to her mid back. Her features were left without the white paint that often donned women’s faces. Simple colour added to cheeks and lips accentuated her more delicate features." adorned would probably be a better word choice. Hope this helps.

Oh what a great fanfic! It's getting hard to find a well written fic with an interesting premise but your's is wonderful. I love the idea behind it and your characterization is great. Keep up the good work.

I love it!!! I love this story and so can not wait for the next chapter!!!! Ahh, I have to know what happens next!!! I love this story!!!

Yeah baby! Loved the update. I've so been looking forward to it since like forever. Well, thanks again and until next we meet.

Enjoyed it, as usual. I liked the small points about Kagome's unfamiliarity with the clothing and her awkwardness, and her little michiko hissy. It was a little childish, but she IS young and a little childish in a lot of ways, so I enjoyed that quite a bit. And I like Shun and Michiko as well, actually. I hope we see more of them. Oh, I'd love to look you up on NaNoWriMo, but they've disabled the author search, I understand. If you care to, I'm at http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/202915 Otherwise, I'll look you up when it comes back up! :-)