rate_review Reviews

Some writers find it easier to concentrate on only one story at one time. Maybe you have let too much time pass between the chapters and that´s why you are losing the inspiration for this story.

I really hope that you won´t discontinue this fic some day, especially not because of some reviewers, but it has already won some awards, so you know that people HAVE to love your story. Some people are always dissatisfied, so don´t let it get to you.

I don´t think that the story would be better WITH porn. That wasn´t what I wrote. I just think that the rating is too high. On AFF.net there are 3 ratings: "Adult" (suggested sexual situations and violence, swearing...), "Adult+" (gore, EXPLICIT sexual situations, etc.) and "Adult++" (no limits at all. darkest plotlines, kinks, torture to death). Scottishfae rated this beautiful story "Adult+", but this rating is too high! This story belongs to the simple "Adult" rating. If it was rated that way nobody would expect explicit lemons here.

I can not believe someone could find any complaint on Unexpected Endeavors.
I only started reading it not long ago but I have been hooked since then.
And you are correct in Adult Fanfiction meaning mature content not just sexual content. (I believe the disclaimer when you first enter the site and verify you are at least 18 says mature content as well)
It is idiots who complain about such ridiculous things that ruin everything else and if they are wanting to read just smut then they can go elsewhere to read it, no?
In the mean time, I sincerally hope you do not let thier criticism and whining bother you as I believe (as do several friends of mine who are also reading UE) that you are doing a great job.

Have a Fantastic Day!

O.o You go girl!! Yes I like lemons, I mean what girl does not when it invovles Sesshoumaru, but you are completely right, some stories are just ruined so that a lemon could be thrown in. Personally it has to be a well written lemon that is a big part of the plot. In your story it may have been leading up to the lemon, as a change in life for Kagome, but the main point is the struggles she goes through, and the love she finds. I am more interested in what Rin is going to do, and if Sesshoumaru will fall for her. Good job on the story, I can not wait for your next update.

And a remark to what lily say about that it should only be ADULT without the +. Well no scottishfae did it right, because some people would probably perfer not to read the part were he is naked in the water with her, or his growing arousal. Or the fact that she is naked in with him. The fact it even hints to a lemon when she takes off her shirt and they begin their lovemaking, that might upset someone so by putting the + we are being warned that there could be sexual innuendos or naked scenes.

I love this story! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for what will happen in the next chapter! ^^

By the way, who are the two beings that are plotting against the gang, besides Haru?? XD

i love it!!! please up-date again as soon as possible!!! i have to know what happens next!!!

cant u give a good lemon because ur story is good but there is no lemon it is quite dull so plz repost the chapter no19 and give some lemon or in future chapters give lots of lemon because it make ur story very good and very enchainting

As Kagome was poisoned she received her first kiss from Sesshoumaru. Yet now she behaves as if the kiss in this chapter was her first kiss, as if she didn´t know the feeling of another tongue in her mouth.

And this is Adultfanfiction.net. Why do you put this story here if there are no adult themes like lemons or violence? You cut the lemon as if your story was rated T, so there´s no need to post it here.

This is no flame, so don´t get me wrong. I love your story, otherwise I would have stopped reading it at the latest by chapter two, but I did read the whole story. It is beautifully written, soulful as well as humorous. I didn´t detect many misspellings either, if any at all. A sex scene doesn´t make a story better in any way, it isn´t needed at all for a good plot, but on Adultfanfiction.net the readers expect to see at least one lemon in a story that long, I think.
Maybe it wouldn´t even have stood out that there is no lemon in this story if you hadn´t somehow suggested it in chapter 19, but you did, and even if you suggested it, it wasn´t even "suggestive" enaugh to fit to a simple "Adult" rating.
You posted this story under the "Adult+" rating and it doesn´t fit there, so you leave me (and some other readers too, as I can see) a bit disappointed. If I read a story at Adultfanfiction.net (under the rating of "Adult+) I read it because there are lemons, as they are illegal and therefore censured in the other fanfiction- archives.
If you aren´t good at lemons, at least change the rating to "Adult" (even if the PG13 rating fits better to your story) or leave any sexual situations out, but please don´t cut the lemon when it´s finally getting really hot like you did and leave your readers high and dry.