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Heya this is funny... but i refuse to give you more compliments or comments on your writing greatness until you update!! I can't go and judge storys by the first chapter now can I?

Unique senerio... I am interested to learn how this turns out... Since I am a die-hard romantic I hope Sesshoumaru has a slightchange of heart as far as Kagome is concerned... Do you have some kind of update list for when you post a new chapter I don't really come to this particular site all that often so it is harder to remember the names of the stories and their authors like I do for the other site... Thanks I look forward to reading your next chapter.
~Brittany

lol An interesting concept for a story. Curious as to why he decided he needs a son or a heir now of all times. Wonder if Kagome might decide to flee home when the time comes. Hehehe, and of course I can't wait for the smut! You've got me hooked! =D

lmao...love it!!!

I like how you got right to the plot of the story right away, no droning on and on about frivilous things. Obviously the foremost question is why would Sesshoumaru NOW, just all of a sudden, want an heir? I think you kept him in character well, but Im curious as to how you are going to portray Inuyasha. Sometimes authors just let him become too stupid to simplify the plot (its alot easier to get kagome with sesshoumaru if she doesnt have something else worthwhile to go to, hence making inuyasha look like a poor choice), and many times Inuyasha is treated as if he has no feelings or any concept of apathy for his companions, which if you keep him in character he SHOULD be at least somewhat contemplative about his actions and emotions. You have a very nice first chapter and I will enjoy reading more so please continue! If you are doing a mailing list for updates, can you put me on?

HOLY CRAP!! What an awesomely concepted plot for a story! I can't wait to read more, and this is being done so well, *fangirl squee!* Update soon when you get a chance!

*blinks* I don't know whether to be enouraging to this particular mode of thought or not. My mainstay is 'I hope the pup is full youkai', but this particular feudal mindset *cough*archaic*cough* is hard to encourage. I am curious to see what this evolves into though. hmm...

update soon nice story

Oh my god! This is too good not for you to finish!
I totally liked the idea of Kagome agreeing to this without knowing!
Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love so far.Please don't stop