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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person bungee_luvin_bunny
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Allo again! I'm happy your taking this story slow and not rushing it, I enjoy your brand of humour very much...plot is important in a story but Interaction between characters is also very essential if the story is to captivate the reader. Congrats to another great chapter...oh and I just wanted to know am I the only one who feels sorry for poor Jankens treatment from his master(krikets chirping)errr...ok nevermind that. Just one other question if Inuyasha is the leader of his pack, why would't he chalenge this kind of agreement...I mean he is the alpha, it's clear he has more than friendly feeling towards kagome?? Oki anyhow I'll shut up now ...till next chappy! Aurevoir!!
person raven28
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it rilly good keep it up ! up deat son please.
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am enjoying the story throughly! I don't like that Sesshomaru tricked Kagome into the deal, but she just didn't pay enough attention. Maybe now Inuyasha will confess his feelings before anything bad happens. We shall see.
person Shadow
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!! I find this story interesting!
person E.C.
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool, very cool. I understood the chapter just fine. Can't wait to hear more!!!
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! I can't wait for future chapters so get moving and start posting, lol.
person AIdeen
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please up-date soon!!! I have to know what happens next!!! I love it, love it, love it!!!1
person darkmoon_darklight
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I have always enjoyed your crossovers and to se that you're doing my favorite pairing makes me all giddy inside! I have a feeling that Kagome's not going to be back at home for a long time. Though I live in the North my Mother is from Mississippi in the South. We have a saying down there that we call breaking the plate. When I child leaves home (i.e. for college or for marriage)the parents "break the plate" so when Kagome's plate breaks I assume that its SYMBOLISM? PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait
person Arryelle
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome can't wait for more its too awsome and ohhhh omen Gome's plate fell! hehehe

update we you can

Arry