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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person MercifulDeath
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this one :3 Can't wait for more!
person angel
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh you show them who is lord of the land .... i love it .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person quirkyslayer
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking brilliant. It's hilarious, well-written, IC, and most of all, it's enjoyable and not ripe with cliches. THANK GOD FOR YOU! You do the pairing justice. I'm so bookmarking this story. Excellent job!
person wynter89
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It started off really unexpectedly... i didnt expect within the first chapter that Sesshomaru would ask Kagome to bare his son. I wonder what will happen when or if Kagome finds out that she will have to bare Sesshomaru's son, will she tell her mother about it, or will Sesshomaru not allow her to visit her family cause her time is up.

I really love how it is moving on. I cant help but wonder what will happen after she has the child... soo many questions left unanswered. lol

I enjoy reading this, i am very glad that i read it.

good luck
i hope you update soon
person bungee_luvin_bunny
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I'm so happy Jankin's is getting some luvin hugs from Rin...she is so sweet...happy this is not another story where Rin gets attached too quickly to Kagome and it's understandable that she would have little jealous emotions considering her Sesshomaru-sama would need of another child...she's worried that she will be viewed diffrently in his eyes. I like that you brought on new characters to the story...variety is always a plus in a story...the bear youkai sounds arrogant and snobish (I like him hi! hi!)reminds me of moi when grumpy lol! Keh! I think Inuyasha is not the brightest crayon in the box too sometimes but hey you would probably do the same to to protect someone you love. Anyhow just wanted to say I am honored that you dedicated a chapter to little ol me (does little happy dance..spins ten times and falls on her ass...err dizzy..lol!). Love ya and keep the chapters comming...again sorry for my spelling...Oh and good luck to you in school...and work...you rule! err that sounded weird ...oki I shut up now..Aurevoir chère!!
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this story!!! I would absolutely love it if you put me on your mailing list. You can e-mail me at hellspixie18 @ yahoo.com just without the spaces. I can't wait to see what happens next... and I have a quick little suggestion for future chapters, mainly once Kagome gets pregnant....have you thought of perhaps making kagome pregnant with twins? lol I would love to see Sesshy handling TWO little monsters that take after kagome in their attitude (you know the famous little temper she has) lol I can see it now. update soon cuz I can't wait to read more.
person Lena
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so very funny so far! I really loved the way that Sesshoumaru tricked Kagome into the deal to begin with. I think that even if Kagome told him that she felt tricked into the agreement, I don't think that he saw it like that. It was like she was dealing with a Demon lawyer -- lol!

Also, the whole idea of Kagome having to have Sesshoumaru's baby is just hysterical. Brings back memories of Rosemary's baby! Please keep updating this fic because I'm really enjoying it. Thanks, Lena.
person kar;a
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! i love this story!!!!!!! please update soon! awwe rin is worried sesshoumaru will forget her.. he wants a son.. when he already has a daughter! :( poor rin! anywho! please update soon!
person inuyoukai8
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where you go with it. Please hurry and update.... I need my fix! LoL
person blackbloodedkunoichi
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weeee! Another chapter! Thank you for emailing me it again! Ooooh I can't wait for the juicy parts! XD

Veryyyyyyyyyyy gooood looooove it <333333333


email again =3? Please?