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k, now you got me curious. I wonder what Sesshoumaru wrote in the scroll...guess I gotta wait and see, but I really don't wanna, so I hope you update again soon.

I must say this is a really good story, your story has me bouncing off the walls to read more I hope you UDATE as SOON as you can.

I enjoy your portrayal of Jakken. He is nothing if not loyal, maybe a bit snivvelling too, but definately loyal. He overlooks Sessh's bad habits and character flaws. Too bad he can't find some way out of this.
I also enjoy how Inu is being more protective and caring and admitting she is part of his pack and he has a right to complain since Sessh tricked her.
On a legal note, (yes, I'm a lawyer) when someone makes an offer to contract, the receiver can refuse the offer, accept the offer, or come back with a counter-offer. But there must be a present intent to contract the service. It would seem that Kagome did not have the intent, though her suggestions could be construed as a counter-offer, except for the part where she told him her suggestions were to help him approach some other female.
Personally, I would love to see her get out of the contract, and him follow her around like a whipped puppy begging her to reconsider. Imagine, thinking he could just arbitrarily decide she should bear him an heir, then get rid of her when it's old enough. Men!
Keep up the good work. I enjoy your writing style.

Impressive writing and character representation. Especially Inuyasha. I also like the fact that there's no character bashing. Poor ol Jaken catches hell in most fics. lol! I'm really curious as to what Sesshomaru has going on in his head. You've built a nice little mystery here, and I look forward to its unraveling.

(dies after seeing that it's only an AN)

You are /such/ a tease!

X_x



-DM

Your writing technique is amazing; very descriptive. I sincerely hope to hear from you again very soon, and anxiously await the next chapter. I adore your style, and use of diction. Kudos to you for your exquisite dipiction of Sesshomaru, I can honestly say that this story is one of the very few where his character is believable. Anyways, update ASAP.
Your loyal reader and reviewer,
ChaoticReverie

(stand tall)

(will review until there's an update!)

(knows that may be a bit cause the author has school and such... but will still review!)

(glomps the author) ^.^


-DM

I can't wait for your next update, and thank you. How is everything with you?

*stands proudly* I come bearing a present! *proceeds to flash all within the vicinity* Oh, sorry. lol

I meant, review when I said present, honest!

Okay so I'm glad you finally updated. If you can't take pride in anything (which I'm sure you can) take pride in the fact that your story is THE ONLY SESS/KAGOME FIC I read, let alone come into this section of the Inuyasha Fandom to check and see if there's been an update. ^_^

I love Sesshomaru in this chapter, he's great! I especially like when he tells Rin that he did reward Jaken... by not killing him. XXD That was funny. I'm also interested to see how Rin turns out with your new little twist of her having another "sibling." Oo! And I can't wait until the Night of the New Moon! (squee)

Update when you have time (cause I'm just starting school again, too, and trying to find another job (I'm taking bartending classes at the moment from 10am to fucking 6pm ugh!)) so I'm swamped as well and totally understand! Keep up the great work! ^_^


-DM

Wow. How lovely! You write so beatifully, and the story is...how do I say this...actually GOOD. Yay! I love the idea of a human and a demon relationship. This is a wonderful take to it; it's always so hard to figure out how to FORCE them to be in close quarters long enough to begin to like each other. Their baby would be the ultimate being, would it not? A demon who could purify demons. That in itself would be reaosn enough for Sesshomaru to seek Kagome's aid. But Ah! I'm babbling! I look forward to the next chapter. Till then, Jaa!