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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! A new chapter. Keep it up. The story is very well written, and the characters are true to the storyline. Great job.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anouther great chapter, I think you did a great job on Jaken he's a better character than he gets the rap for in many fics. Also thank you for the no character bashing hope to read more soon.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you on the character bashing. Most of the time it's not even done well and comes across as just that, bashing. It serves no other purpose in the fic.
I'm waiting to see how Sesshomaru reacts when he's confronted with the 'you tricked us' I guess his reaction would depend on who said it and how. Keep up the good work!
I'm waiting to see how Sesshomaru reacts when he's confronted with the 'you tricked us' I guess his reaction would depend on who said it and how. Keep up the good work!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're taking the whole Jaken situation. It puts a new spin on things. Another great chapter! Job well done :)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! But I was really bumbed out that you didn't include what Sesshoumaru had to say in the letter.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated! I am glad that Jaken didnt get beaten in this fic. Usually he gets the sich knocked out of him, but it great to have a change.... though it is still nice to see jaken repremaned when he picks on Rin.
good luck
i hope you update soon.
good luck
i hope you update soon.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am truly honnored for another dedication to your story. again, another very good chapter! actually, I kinda have a fetish for sessh/Kag pairing, if you wouldn't mind doing a one shot for me please? My birthday was yesterday and i couldn't go out. Im 21 now* grins* But anyways! if you didn't mind, I'll also give you my e-mail adress as well if you wanna talk about it. plus I dont know if you like semi rape and/or BDSM. but something on the lines of that please. again, good luck with school and I'll be seeing you around
Dawna Sama
Dawna Sama
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow she learned a lot about him and inuyasha.... please please more ... later for now
angel
angel
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always. I actually like what you have done to Jaken, I have yet to really intergrate him into my story since I really didn't know how to portray him. You have done a very good job. I like it. Continue on great writer! I can't wait for the next chapter.
~Much Love~
Faerie Demoness
~Much Love~
Faerie Demoness
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know Kagome's mother is right he did trick her and now I lose my respect for the Sesshoumaru that I once liked!! And he is so ashamed of her he is putting her where no one will be with her very much, he's a sick prick!