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by Scottishfae

schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now this is interesting... though I'm kinda wishing you hadn't put in that table of contents.... It sounds very ominous and makes me a bit anxious of reading more until those bits are covered. >> I know, I know, I'm a wuss. ><.
At any rate, I'm surprised Kags didn't take more time to collect stuff before jumping through the well to proposition Sess... not to mention taking a year off is going to give Naraku a hell of a head start shard collecting and make a sitting duck of Kags. Not very well thought out on them at all.
person tia
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating and I hope that you feel much better. now amaya is going against her son with the help of the other taiyoukai and higher court members but sesshomaru does not bow to the court of its pressures and what of kai? what is he thinking about because he doesn't seem to be going along with amaya or what the others want either? what does he know that the others don't know or does he simply fear sesshomaru wrath and anger more when he finds out what they are up to?

what of kagome and will she trully have sesshomaru's pup? sesshomaru doesn't seem to be spending enough time around kagome to even get to know her, because even though he is not mating her she wont let sesshomaru just walk up to her and lay her down. so what will he do to get her in the mood so to speak or to have her even attracked to him in that way?

I think amaya might have put something in the food or either she's that confident of her mechinations and plans.

update soon onegai

ja ne
person Vyper
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is just a peeping tom. He has to get involved with screwing up everyones lives or he isn't happy. I actually know people like that and they should all drop dead.
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am SO enjoying this. Thank you for continuing to write.
person Vyper
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Honestly Kagome is going through a lot to help Sesshoumaru, but fact is she should be his mate if she is going to do this. Kouga and any other male who wants her is just out of luck.
person Dolly
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love your story soo much
person Vyper
schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems Sesshoumaru has thought this whole thing out pretty well. I am surprised he wants a hanyou pup, but things could be weirder. I also liked the exchange between Kouga and Inuyasha. The two of them are fricking hillarious when they are at each other's throats.
person bluerose001
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far!!!! I can't wait till Monday to read this story I'm
Looking forward to reading it! :D
person Vyper
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that Kagome is taking this whole thing in stride. It isn't like she loves Sesshoumaru or anything. I wonder if they can really make things work out between them with Inuyasha also loving Kagome.
person Darkmystic
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey put me on the mailing list if you have one, i want to know when the next chapter will be up.

Chibi.yuriko@yahoo.com