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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person Metis
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy am I conflicted. I hate Force Fics but this isn't quite it. I know that Sess is in the wrong, but on what point (aside from his plans of detachment) it is hard to pinpoint. Maybe I'll come back in a few chapters, after the blast zone cools a bit. ;)
person aurora2
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is amayzing
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome story so far!!! I love it and I can't wait to read more chapters. Your plot for this story is very unique. I love the whole idea so keep up the good work. update soon.
person akume
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting development. I'm glad you included Sesshoumaru's mother in this chapter, but I have to wonder is Haru an actual character in the anime or is this your own concoction. I haven't gotten that far in the manga. Anyway, thanks again. Until the next update. Ja ne.
person Mel
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again you have outdone yourself. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love the detailed interaction between everyone. They actually have conversations that are logical and informative. Keep up the good work and Please update again as soon as you can!
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was so great. I like how you're interacting other people such as Jiro and Kin...this is a very well done story, is well paced, and I must say, I did not expect another inu brother. And Sessoumaru's mother still alive? Cool. Of course it works for this story since we don't really know what became of his mother in the series. It'll be interesting to know what this other brother is up to and how their mother will react with Kagome as the mother to her soon to be grandchild. By the way, how can a demon guarantee that their partner will bear a male or female? What if she does have a girl? What's he to do then? Keep her until she does have a son? What if she never does? It wouldn't be her fault of course, she has no control over that particular aspect of life. Lotsa questions, I know. I love this story. I can't wait for you to update!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Snowfall
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! How are you going to get Kagome to actually do this!? You won't make her against her will, will you? You have me so worried. And poor Inuyasha. I just want to cry at the whole predicament. I don't care what his reasons are, right now, I really hate Sesshoumaru. So there. Humph! ^_^

Snow
person DeathWish
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEW CHAPPIE! I AM SO HAPPY! YOU HAVE NO IDEA! PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!
person Airy
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you have updated. I rarely find a fanfiction I really like. I have had a very bad week, with my mom getting married again. I hope that you continue with this story, because some writers don't continue. I wonder why Sesshomaru's brother wants to meet Kagome so bad, other than curiosity.
person Raven
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this. it's a refreshing new view on some charas whom are completely overlooked in the anime. the movie u saw part of was affections touching across time. that one was ok but u may find through the looking glass much better. anyway i hope you keep up with this story as it is a wonderful pov. i've even added this to my favorites list so i can keep and eye on it. watching and waiting (im)patiently for ur next update.
Raven (loverovyoai)

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