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*snicker snicker* Sounds like this could get really sticky for poor Kagome. Haru is a riot! Good luck with school, I know how hard it can be to juggle everything.

I just found this beautifully crafted story and I loved every minute of it. It is creative and flowing. It is also very funny. I really like how you have fleshed out every character without sideline babble. You are direct, informative and entertaining. I like how you have treated Inuyasha and Jaken, in partcular. Inuyasha cares for Kagome like a part of the pack, which she is, and he respects her. Jaken has always been true to his master and Sesshomaru shows this by placing all his trust in him.

Another Brother? YUM. One more delicious tidbit for us to drool over. I hate it when I run into these really good stories so far into the chapter. I like to be there at the beginning to watch it unfold and to cheer you on but I found you now and I am not letting you go.

Now that we have found the loop-hole in the deal what-ever are we going to do now. I think everybody better keep all their eyes on Haru at all times. He can probably teach Miroku a few things.

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Til next time, Deb (Flightoffancy)

Wow, that's quite a deal-breaker there. But I certainly hope that the deal can be redone. I liked the chaos it was causing. ;) Very well-written work and a real pleasure to read. I look forward to the next installment.

Poor Kagome. Her life keeps getting more complicated as time goes by. Anyway, thanks for the update, until next time. Ja.

Nice chapter. I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do when he finds out all of his plans are void. Update soon please.

I hope all your classes work out well. I am goin gthrough the same thing. But if it is not to much to ask.......... could you please update soon?! I would really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, appreciate it!
Thank you!

This is a great story! I can't wait for what happens next and I want to what Haru is going to do or about what Sesshomaru is going to do about the deal.

u are sooooooo mean it should have been longer. more more soon soon. PLEASE

What a great chapter! I think the direction that the story is going is great, you keep doing the unexpected. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is one of my favorite stories.

WOW...I hadn't expected that...I wonder how Sesshoumaru's going to handle Koga's claim? This is a really fun story, I thoroughly enjoy reading it.