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Das was most interestin'... I loved it... Its gettin' more and more intense as the chaps go by.
I hope cha update soon.

Hmm. Where to begin? Thank goodness this isn't N/C. I like your take on Kagome's character. I'm glad Sess has some competition; it will cause him to delve a bit more into his feelings. I hope the perv of a brother gets his hide handed to him (hope Kagome keeps up her attitude toward him and even blasts him). I don't mind the variation from Jaken's past. After all, this is FANfiction. If I want complete accuracy I'll stick with the Manga series. Your writing style is fine. Any rough edges (which you have to squint to see) will be dealt with by time and practice. And... I understand about school. Just thank the PTB's that you don't have my statistics class!.. Oh, and I hope someone (guess who? :) ) can pound some sense into Kouga's brain!

Your classes are more importent then my gift fic. Just make sure you pass and graduate with high honners ok?
Another good fic as uaual, keep up the good work.


Dawna Sama

update soon

and i hopeschool gets better i've been lucky so far with h/w
sooooo hope everything gets better

That was great! This is just such an amazing story. I love it. And no, I don't think your writing style is warbling or anything. Seems pretty stable to me. As far as school goes, I'll tell you like I tell my husband, I believe you can do it. Concentrate, but not too much, have fun. I know you can do it. I can't wait to see your next chapter.

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

nice but make it better where sesshomaru and kasgome have sex

LOL! I LOVE THIS ALREADY!

yah! Turmoil and testosterone! I love it, especially Haru so don't let anyone knock it. I'm really interested in seeing where your taking this now with the latest info about Sessh's claim being countered by Koga's prior one, or visa vera? Anywho..update again soon!

Okay, one stop beating yourself up. Your doing a great job! I can't wait for the next chappie.
Two take your time. Edit if necessary and set realistics goal for how much you can write a day and not interfere with class. Good luck with everything!

man sess will not be happy when he finds out about this .... how will sess get kagome to have is kid now .......... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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