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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan of yaoi so it would be perfectly fine with me to include a same sex side romance, as long as it doesn't take over. ~_-
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since I have been a very bad reader by not reviewing, I will answer your question and review. Yes, I love yaoi. If the majority of your readers do not respond, I would say that it is silent consent. Anyone who doesn't want it will probably be screaming and yelling.
I find your fic interesting in that it puts a modern girl in quite a primitive situation. However, I am happy with the fact that it appears that Sesshoumaru is not guilty of treachery, but of a misunderstanding that, of course, he will in all probability never see. Also, you seem to be warming Kagome up to the idea because she seemed a bit sad when Kouga showed up and actually ended the deal. I hope that the situation can be resolved without someone getting hurt. Sesshoumaru does appear to be well versed in diplomacy and proper protocol.
I love Jakken. A character does not have to follow canon in order to make me happy. It is nice that you have him protecting Kagome and beginning to warm up to her. That is a real compliment.
I know that Inuyasha is simply trying to protect Kagome. Yeah, he's a jerk and sometimes it seems as though he is behaving atrociously when he really is trying to do well.
I did not truly believe that you would make this non-con, regardless of my earlier fangirly ravings. And, I truly did have fantasies of Haru engaging in some steamy situations with certain other male (s). So, don't mind me.
Great fic, keep up the good writing.
Snow
I find your fic interesting in that it puts a modern girl in quite a primitive situation. However, I am happy with the fact that it appears that Sesshoumaru is not guilty of treachery, but of a misunderstanding that, of course, he will in all probability never see. Also, you seem to be warming Kagome up to the idea because she seemed a bit sad when Kouga showed up and actually ended the deal. I hope that the situation can be resolved without someone getting hurt. Sesshoumaru does appear to be well versed in diplomacy and proper protocol.
I love Jakken. A character does not have to follow canon in order to make me happy. It is nice that you have him protecting Kagome and beginning to warm up to her. That is a real compliment.
I know that Inuyasha is simply trying to protect Kagome. Yeah, he's a jerk and sometimes it seems as though he is behaving atrociously when he really is trying to do well.
I did not truly believe that you would make this non-con, regardless of my earlier fangirly ravings. And, I truly did have fantasies of Haru engaging in some steamy situations with certain other male (s). So, don't mind me.
Great fic, keep up the good writing.
Snow
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you want to get your review board back onto the screen without the need to scroll, copy and paste review number id # 3000028784 into a Word document and break up the long strings of characters. Then take the review off of your board. Repost it informing the reviewer of what you have done. Make sure to copy the pen name, date and review number Your board should be back to normal.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im fine with you putting yaoi in your story. i've read them before. i have an idea if some people dont want you to put a yaoi scean but you decide to then you can put a warning before and after it.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Please don't put guy on guy action in this!
Please don't put guy on guy action in this!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit this nice as hell can't wait 4 the update.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! How great is that that Koga's claim finally works for Kagome's benefit? Love the way you did that. And Haru's presence should prove very entertaining, too. Let's get all 3 silver-haired males in an uproar over the girl! Can't wait to see how Sess takes the news about Koga!! There's so much potential story here -- I can't wait to read more! Great job!! And I think your writing style is great!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waayyyyy coolll.. i love your story! I thought it was very original. Poor Kagome now she has four problems.. hahahaha.. anyway i just wanted to ask if you could put me in your alert list. I don't normally visit adultfanfiction but i do want to keep reading your fanfic..
Thanks!
Thanks!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that the storyline for this is absolutely *wonderful* and original. i love it. ^^ i can't wait for the next chapter. you're so good at cliff-hangers! please update soon.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm interesting.... i cant wait until you update soon!.... i want kag. to have sess's baby... is that so bad?lol damn koga!