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Oh! And as an openly Bi woman, I would find it both constructive and non-offensive for you to add a same-sex story to this. Depending on how it is approached, it could really be a bonus to the story. Your side-character depth is wonderful and I love learning about these characters of yours. Keep up the wonderful work!!

Wow. This is a crazy story if I do say so myself. I like that you added in Haru. It's good to have some comic relief between all that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha tension. It kind of sucks that the whole deal became void thanks to Koga. He ruins everything. T_T And with the yaoi relationship...I think it just counts on who Haru ends up with. Hopefully not Inuyasha. Just seems to strange. Sorry. ^^'' I can't wait to read more! Good luck with all these midterms.

the story is very unique and interesting. the characters are acting within their personalities given the circumstances and situations you have placed them in, i do note some ooc-ness but the the general dominant personality traits are evident.

legal claims and loopholes aside, i noticed in one of your replies the possibility of sas/kag having a daughter... their agreement as stated was that she would bear a son, if the outcome of the pregnancy was a girl, there would be subsequent attempts to impregnate her until the desired result would be achieved. this would be encompassed by the stated agreement. she would bear a son implying the agreement would be in effect until she bore the agreed upon son.

quite an indteresting dilemma, and an intelligent, captivating and wonderful story, you are an amazing writer!

thank you,
ginny

i am not a particular fan of yaoi but as long as there is no make-out or sex between men i am fine.

Now as an authoress myself I have to agree with you. if one can not make an intellegent arguement without being an ass then they probably should keep it to themselves. How things are portrayed in a fanfic is totally the author/authoress' perogiative. Now as a woman I have to say that yoai is simply delicious and in a word HOTT!!!! I am enjoying your story and like how you have this worked out plz let me know when u update, I mena i have u saved to my favorites list on my comp and check for updates pretty much daily but still it would be cool if u'd just drop me a message even if it's just to say "i've updated" that would totally rock. Thx.
Raven

ok im really likeing you story. its funny and interesting. i;ll defintally keep reading it.

I'm a yaoi fan (Loveless and Princess Princess top my list), but I'd prefer it if you concentrated on writing the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru alone. IMO, you write enough regarding the minor characters already to distract from the KagSess goodness, so developing another relationship (yaoi, yuri, het, minor or whatever else) will further take away the precious words, pages, paragraphs and chapters from the KagSess goodies. I want my KagSess more than I want anything else. I don't care about the other relationships and I would like to read more about Kagome and Sesshoumaru (and their baby) instead of anything else.

Thank you. My weeks are getting better, I find it easier to cope with the situation by writing in my Diary.I hope you update soon. I really love this story.

Hi,
I've been following this fic for a bit and I really like it. I don't know if I reviewed it yet (maybe on mediaminer). I am reviewing to give you some moral support though (no more trick updates, grrrrr). I'm a student and I definitly know how things get, so hang in there and know that your fans are patiently waiting for your next installment. as for your question...I never got the fascination with yaoi...especially since its mostly girls that like it...I don't know, I guess I wouldn't have anything against it. I don't think it would make me uncomfortable, but as long as it isn't a main character (that would be too oc in my opinion). I think you are a great writer so you can probably pull it off. do what you feel is best. I vote no i guess, but meh, I won;t be mad at you if you go ahead and do it. I kinda liked Haru's annoying flirtations...but he'll screw anything that walks, so maybe some yaoi with him wouldn't really change anything. email me if you wnat, I'll answer more questions. also, I couldn't get the live journal site to work what do i put at the end? is it your name dot fic or slash fic? i left it as it was and i tried a hypen too. let me know.
thanks

I would perfectly enjoy a side-story with yaoi in it. I'm rather fond of yaoi fiction myself so I certainly could never speak against having more written. :D Of course, it is your story so you should have free reign over how the plot (and any side-plots) shall proceed, but it's very practical and nice for you to ask. Can't wait to read more... you've got me hooked! ;)