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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person Lady Rain
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I am loving how you are weaving this little story together! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment so don't take too long!! ^_^
person Kura
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting plot idea, I like it ^^ And Sesshoumaru shows that he rather cares about Kagome quite a bit, doesn't he? Can't wait to read more, hope you update soon~

And I don't think people will mind any mild yaoi hints at all, so I don't think you need to worry. Nice of you to be so considerate though ^^ I think the hint on the side will add more spice and dimension to this story, so its not just only centered on Kagome's dilemma ... and it's quite the dilemma isn't it? Since she doesn't really think she want to have sex with Sesshoumaru but she is attracted to him as well ...

Loving it so far, update soon ^^
person Kaze
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love how open the boys are when they're injured. Haha. It's really sad that Kaede had to die though. I have a question though: Why didn't Sesshoumaru just bring her back to life using Tenseiga the way he did with Rin? Just wondering...
person Metis
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(waves) Still here. I like this chapter. Nothing like getting wounded to make tentative truces. And it seems that Naraku has some use after all. I'm glad the hair won't stay that length, but it's an interesting image. Sess seems to be starting on the path of enlightenment. For all their centuries, I think the emotional maturity comes slowest for youkai. Humans don't have that kind of time to goof off/be in denial/put it off indefinately.
person Metis
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nearly forgot to mention how I loved his gentleness and attention to Shippou. It appears that Canine Inu have good pack instinct and care for pups/kits. Very advanced species. That's wonderful. I wish more humans did too.
person yukisan
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i just wanted to review your story here as well! { my lj name is fieryamazon } ^_^ great job! i'm looking forward to the next chapter. good luck.
person Vaneles
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter! update again soon! ^_~
person chikyuu
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont mind yaoi if I dont have to read it. Sorry its just not my cake.
Very good story. I like Kagome's characterization. She's kind, sweet, intelligent AND she's not sitting Inuyasha to kingdom come every minute. When I read a story where she sits him from first chapter to the last...well thats not kind, sweet and intelligent at all. Thats a shrew.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its me again! Thanks for the 2 points and the cookie! ~wanders off to find some milk to go with it~

Thanks for the recognition! Most of us like to see our names in things like that. I'm going to do something of the sort whenever I finish my story.

Now, I was wondering, could the pelt that was nearly destroyed have some sort of meaning to the stoic lord? Will you give his arm back to him eventually? Does the wolf harbor secret feelings for the "other" brother? I can see Kagome falling for Sesshy if he keeps doing all the heroic stuff. I can see Inuyasha's heart completely breaking when he finally realizes he's lost something grand. She may get kidnapped by Naraku, and saved by Sess, but only after something terrible has happened. ~Gasps~ What if she had a son by HIM!?!?! Oh my god, I am good. Eh, but its your story. Write as you please. And thanks again. I hope to hear more good things from you!

~Much Love~
Faerie Demoness
person Angie
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this Chap. it was funny, i could imagine koga with short hair..haha ..iww..haha he wouldnt look as hot, would he?..lol anywayz..PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE... UPDATE SOON!