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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person yukisan
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! great chapter! i'm looking forward to the next one. good luck.
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person Biteswhenprovoked
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this fic i like how neither sesshomaru nor kouga are giving up their claim to kagome. i like how you have the brothers trying to get along. and im liking haru i thought i wouldnt but hes funny and reminds me of some of my friends so far i'd give this fic a 10
person kinkyneko33
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great, as usual. this story is hilarious, cute, and i love it! update soon!
person akumae
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the bickering being done between Sesshoumaru and Haru. It's just how a family should interact. Well, thanks again for the update until next time. Ja.
person Dawna Sama
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, another good chapter! your getting bwetter at this, you know? keep on writing! ok?

Dawna Sama
person Jennifer
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I'm not one to choose a favorite parring because there is a different story for all of my moods. This I have to say is one of my favorites to read, along with The House Of Moon. You write each chapter well and that says a lot. I hate when writers rush chapters and the story weens from it's original intent. Keep it up, take your time. We can wait because it's worth waiting for.

P.S. I like your idea for the Yaoi.
person Twilight Garden
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this chapter it was just great. I hope that you update soon.
person Red Lady
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...if Kikyo had slapped me like she did Kagome, I would have bitch slapped her so hard her clay body would have fell apart. I hope U don't let that bitch get a way with slapping Kagome!!
person angel
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man why does she always have to be so bitchy ... im glad sess and haru are going to help them... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel