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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

person Shiva
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luv this chapter it so cute, yet sad. Keade is dead :(
And why did you let Kagome get slapped like that? And you makin Sesshomaru into a player, player. Update soon.
person Metis
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Cookies and Points! Chocolate Chip I hope :) .... Hmm, I wonder if maybe, kinda, just accidently someones claws/weapons could 'slip' and no more Kikyou? (dreamy look). Accidents do happen. ;)
person Faerie Demoness
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...as far as the arm and suggestions. Let me think... 1. Maybe during a battle with Naraku, he unwittingly gives back Sesshoumaru his arm... 2. His mother knew how to get it back this whole time but felt he needed to learn a lesson... 3. There's always Kagome and her growing powers as a miko (they are right?)... 4. Haru or Inuyasha learn of a way or a spell to help him, but only to their advantage, and maybe thinking it would gain favor from Kagome... 5. After a gruesome battle, near death, Kagome finds the strength to weild his sword and wipe away the goblins, in the process giving his arm back...oooh, maybe weilding his sword would help her powers... That's all I can think of for now. All of them sound pretty good to me, use them at your pleasure. Hope I helped some. My story on the other hand is in trouble. Its been at least a month and a half, and I now only have one sentence on page five. Ugh! Hope everything goes well with the next chapter and hope all is well with school. Until next time!

~Much Love~
Faerie Demoness
person Demitria Miriam
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Oh man. I was NOT expecting that HUGE tangle of love web to be introduced (Kouga, Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, (sort of) Haru and Kagome)... now all we need is Akitoki from the feudal times and Hojo-kun from present day!! Bwuahahaha!! Oh hell, AND Naraku (though probably not romantically)... XXD

I want to rip Kikyou a new one. This only enforces my hatred for her (though I suppose she has her reasons). I still think she's a bitch regardless.

I'm glad I found this fic again. I've read two Sess/Kag fics in the entirty of my fanfiction reading career(the House of the Moon fic, which was okay... I couldn't be bothered to finish it though and yours). That's a huge thing, keep in mind; my reading just your fic alone for this pairing, as I've said before, I think.

There are some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors but for the most part it's really good! I love how the brothers are getting along (as 'along' as they can in such a situation) and I'm glad that there IS another brother (a half-brother no less). I think that's awesome! Yay!

Keep up the great work!


-DM
person Mel
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Thank you so much for updating. Have I told you this is one of my favorite fics? Well it is, so keep up the good work.
person AIdeen
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! So good!! Please up-date again soon!! I love it!! They, Sess and Kags, are so cute together!!!!
person swtdrm01
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I love it! It's comical and romantic.
person TimeFlys
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really cute! I'm really enjoying it. I was wondering why Sess wasn't using his sword to bring her back to life. It would have gotten him points with Kagome. I also want to see how Rin will react to Kagome, it should be intresting. Can't wait till the next chapter.
person sky_040
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story longer chapers plase but writing a great story like this must take a while. keep it up.
person kawaii-miko
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats realy cool i do think sess should get his arm back you could always say kagomes miko healing powers did it
i think there should have been someone to hit kik for hitting kag i hate kik
update real soon