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for Unexpected Endeavors

by Scottishfae

schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I've been reading along and getting quite the kick outta the sense of humor you have, when it hit me... Kagome is kinda 'Mary Sue'ish. Damn, I wanna be the center of attention in that many good looking male characters. *snickers* I must agree with Kouga though... what the hell is with the sudden bouts of touchy feely between the miko and the Taiyoukai? Sounds a bit fluffy for Sesshoumaru.

I don't mean to sound offensive or anything, and I just wanted you to know that I sat down and read all 11 chapters and I really do enjoy the storyline. I wouldn't mind being added to your mailing list if you would. HAHAHAAHAHA... I'd pay to see a fight between Naraku and Sess' mother. Let the fur fly!!

I'm wondering if the fact that Kouga promised to marry Ayame is gonna be the technical loophole that gets Kagome back to square one with the deal? And I must say I've gotten the impression from the beginning that the Inu Lord was too noble and honorable to be forcing the miko into his bed. Really gonna be interesting to see how he woes her for that little event.

Awaiting the next chappie with bated breath. Keep up the good work and much love!!!
person kit
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleasee finish soon! well...just don't stop writing or leave us hanging for months on end :) i LOVE this story. i check every week for updates *feels like a geek* ^^;;
person Shiva
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy u updated and I so feel on the skool an written thing...Its so HARD :(
But I just want u 2 know I love it! And I'll keep readin til its done.
person madmiko
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I jumped over here from MM to get the full chappie --LOVE IT!! Worth the wait, though i can't wait for the next one!! (Hope you get all A's on your finals, and a new chapter out soon after that!);) My only plea -- please don't pair off Sango and Inu! That pairing gives me the willies. love the way Miroku and Haru were getting along. Great moments with Sess and Kag! The pinky-holding -- how sweet!! Just about laughed my ass off when Sess tried to get Haru to seduce Koga! Not his type, huh? Wonder who Haru was referring to when he said some might fit the bill --Miroku? Sango? Kagome? Love the way Haru and Kag get along! Her comparing Sess to Miroku -- priceless!! Is Aiko going to cause trouble? Really love Haru advising Inu and Koga to stop fighting and to pay some attention to Kagome. Can't wait to see some raomantic efforts on their parts. And Sess thinks Haru may be becoming interested in Kagome, huh? Love it! Just love it! With her, what's not to love? This is a great story and I can't wait for more of it. You made my day today!
person Faerie Demoness
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always...looking for a little action though. Hope its soon. I can't wait for the next chappie!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

Sorry, late at night, would write more, but I've gotta get to bed!
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was so very funny! i loved how you resolved the pinky holding issue.

so very entertaining! happy update reward: chocolately goodness!

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

thank
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
didn't mean to review anon...

sorry,
ginny
person odango
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I realy like this story so far please update soon
person akume
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Lord! What a beautifully written chapter. Loved all the interacting within the group. Also, let it be noted that I still dislike this Aiko character. Anyway, thanks again. Until next time. Ja.
person Noneya
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love your story! Its really good! but just to let you know, the phrase is 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' not 'distance' but other than that its really good.... but i wish kaggy would get laid already... hehehe.
Noneya