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It's funny and I loved it. You really need to update soon.

I thought this chapter was not very needed in this story

I want to point out, that this was slightly pointless!!! I mean, why can't oyu work on Shippo and Sesshy hunting or something!? That would make more sense, ya know...and I am slightly dis-appointed......
But, this is like a flash bake sort of thing, like...why Sessho is so...dis-pasionat and stuff, with his mother..........
SO!
Up-date soon, and please state if it is or is not a flash back still or not? Cause, I was confused in the begining with InuTashio in there, cause he was dead last chapter, and then he's alive, so I was confused a bit until I realised..."Hey, this is a flash back! It makes sense now...sorta..." So like, please state if it is a flash back or not...
TTYL;
megan

Can u pleaze update i want to know what happens next.

GOOD LUCK GETTING IN TO GAD SHCOOL SCOTTISHFAE. THE STORY IS REAL REAL GOOD AND I LOVE THE WAY THAT AND I LVOE THE WAY THAT KEGOME TRYING TO KEEP THE PEASE BETWEEN THEM ALL. AND HAVE SESS AND INYUASHA AND KAGO,HUDE. I SEE THAT KEGOME IS STARTING TO FEEL FOR SESS.AND SESS FALL FOR KEGOME. AND I LOVE IT.. GOOD LUCK AND BE WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTERS OF THE STORY AND SEE WHAT HAPPEN NEXT TO ALL THEM.

wow that was great .. i love that flash back .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

hey, i thought there was going to be a 'ministry of funny walks' and a rousing 'lumber jack' song!

Yay! Thanks for the update I've so been looking forward to it for some time now. Anyway, I can't wait for Part II. Until then. Ja.

hmmm...not exactly what i expected. it was interesting, but how does it move the story forward?

this is boring just continue where you left off before thid stupid chapter.