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for New Playmate

by rinflowers1986

person lightning
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't let your morbid humor take you completely.
I love your story btw though at times it seems a little confused especially the last couple chapters though I suppose that could be explained by Inuyasha finding Sesshomaru late in life? In any case much love and *hugs*
person Kibou32
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I'll admit that when I first read the summary and the first chapter, I found myself not wanting to read it, but now that I've read it completely thru I found myself liking it. Therefore I hope you return to writing more about it. I also have a question. If Sesshoumaru is Inuyasha's brother and somewhat protective of the boy, why doens't he protects Inuyasha when he was a young lad in chapter nine?

However good your story is you need to find a beta 'cause either you have typos or you don't know the difference between "seems" and "seams". Check out your spelling more often before updating, then you will have more reviewers. There are people who hate stories that have too many typos or bad spelling/grammar. So check that out.
person Tomika
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gr8 chapter and a very interesting one too, i can't wait to see what's gonna happen in the next chapter..'bout to go read it now ;) ;)
person Tomika
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...that's so sad, i can't believe that Miroku would break Inuyasha's heart like that and Inuyasha still loves him. This chapter was got me all excited that i can't wait to read the next one ;) ;)
person jade
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh. yummy. :D
person riddlestar
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just found this story and loved it!! update quickly!
person VII
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like!! HOT!

VII
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I've only got one question..... wait for it..... wait for it..... WHY ISN'T THERE MORE!!!!! *curls up in fuitil position* Need..... need yaoi... need new chapter... need more. *Clings* Please?
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
v.v.. But we're your M/M readers and we'll do anything for everyday update. T_T!!!! BUT.. I guess waiting never hurt anyone. (Unless they sit in the middle of the road in the dark for three days waiting for an update and then when a drunk driver comes SMASH.... someone got hurt).. Anyways.. cant wait until three days. ^-^.. Awesome job love what your doing with this. Peace
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Amazing. I love where you are taking this and I cannot wait for more. Excitement! Keep up the great work. ^__^