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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Before even reading this story S&M Hanyou, I truly hope you live up to your name, and give Kagome (the freakin' *&^%$@#) a punishiment deserving of her annoyance.~_^
Peace S&M (the name sends shivers sweetpea...)
The Sinner ~_^ *hehehehe*
Peace S&M (the name sends shivers sweetpea...)
The Sinner ~_^ *hehehehe*
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. at first i thought i was only gonna be one or 2 chapters but damn was i wrong. I have to admit ch.4 kinda confused me for a min though
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the first chapter was weird and short but the second explains it but still is short ur story is perfect and i see no errors other than its short so
the next time u updat try to lengthen ur chapter but any otherwise corrections i have none
great story plz update
the next time u updat try to lengthen ur chapter but any otherwise corrections i have none
great story plz update
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i disagree i LOVE this and im surprised that u could think that
i love it and it was a faulter that was fixed and it came out perfectly
so if u could continue that would b most apprciated
upadte soon
i love it and it was a faulter that was fixed and it came out perfectly
so if u could continue that would b most apprciated
upadte soon