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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good..the ending was freaky...
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unbeileveable
Outstanding
Excellent
Do i need to say more.
Ur goin places. And If u keep this up you'll be there b4 u know it.
No one ever saw it coming. ^_^
Outstanding
Excellent
Do i need to say more.
Ur goin places. And If u keep this up you'll be there b4 u know it.
No one ever saw it coming. ^_^
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This could actually work as a "real" short story if you changed the names of the characters.
Lovely angsty story although in the end it has very little to do with Inuyasha. It's set in alternative universe and the characters are occ so the only resemblance to the actual show is the appearance of the characters. Nevertheless you did marvellous job. You are very talented author and you'd be better off writing your own things. Create something original because you have so much potential as a real writer.
Lovely angsty story although in the end it has very little to do with Inuyasha. It's set in alternative universe and the characters are occ so the only resemblance to the actual show is the appearance of the characters. Nevertheless you did marvellous job. You are very talented author and you'd be better off writing your own things. Create something original because you have so much potential as a real writer.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story this I is on of favorite stories I especially enjoy the part at the end when kags shoots Inu haha he so got what was coming to him
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.......that was cool. I loved the way you described her eyes and the ending...damn what an ending. Nice job.