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for Innocence Lost

by DarkRoseBlood

person katiedog
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my wow I love it......did she kill her self to or just him?
person School Girl 2206
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! My! It was such a lovely piece to read, especially because I have such a school-girlish nature. And, oh my, oh my, was it a sight to read. And the ending was quite surprising to read. Oh, Lord, it was just all around good. I really enjoyed reading this piece. And, :Sigh: I find myself breathless. Congradulations, you've really managed to capture my attention and keep it. xD

S.C.'06
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well written. a very awesome fic. very dark and foreboding. i'm not much for unhappy-like endings but this was very, very good. keep up the great writing!! this fic was great. please write more great fics like this. and no i don't think you should continue anything w/ this unless she didnt kill him or sumthing. b/c this fic would be great just left as it is b/c i've seen quite the few fuckups w/ ppl that continue and drag on stories.
person citrusbaby
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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what? what what what what??

wow, i gotta say i wasn't expecting that. if you added more details to the story, i think it would make one hell of a fic. good job.
person Ochiko
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah. I can honestly say that the ending was not what I was expecting at all. I liked it, in any case. Good job.
person Artemis
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that was brilliant. You wrote it wonderfully.
person Hai Ikurei
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What the hell was that?! Is this One-Shot? Really good, but it was a lot more scary o-oUu...Congratulations xD U make me want to kill Inu too lol...But I'm still scared, and in the moon xD didn't understand it too much but besides that I have to say again Congratulations really good...and...*couldn't find another word* again good fic XD!!!. Bye!
person LdyMoon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I liked it and it was intriguing. It had that eery thrilling feeling to it. I'd like to read more of your work.
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... how evil! I like it!
person pat
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow she killed him? u dont see that very often but i liked it and thats what kinda scares me
nice job

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