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by RuriRuri

schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow Mitsuki... that was deep on the part of Sango's inner musings. Very good. I think a lot of authors fail to remember that Sango, although wearing hard exterior, is still a soft, vulnerable female within with all the needs and wants of any other female human. Poor thing, not being able to be held or touched or loved... *sniffles* my heart goes out to her. Now, as for the Scorpion demon... what a wicked twist! Half forest nymph half scorpion hey... I wonder what he looks like in his demon form... Nasty piece of work taunting our lil' slayer so cruelly... I hope she slices out his nasty tongue and feeds it back to him.... ~_^ Another good chapter sweetpea... Keep 'em coming...

Peace,

The Sinner
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Such a short chapter. You've got a good story going here, I can't wait to read more.
person Artemesis
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is looking as though it will be a very interesting story in all the right ways. Please continue.
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That which is forbidden is definitely the most tempting! A hentai after my own heart *hehehe* Seriously though, I love the way that your story is progressing… Oh gods… the thought of Sesshoumaru, Miroku and Inuyasha being such voyeuristic little boys is just hot, but the fact that they’ve made a thriving business from it *The demon lord purred his command, nipping her affectionately on the back of her shoulder.
*falls backwards off chair!* Kworrrr!!! HOT! Hehehe… I could almost see Miroku’s hands grogping an imaginary pair of breasts as he salivated about his new ‘debut’… *lol* And Inuyasha inane drivel as he ponders upon his thought bubble… priceless ^_^. What was it? ‘tch with your feeble mind and ugly pants…’ What a crack up… You so funny *hehehe* Humour and smut wins me hands down…. Oh… and I do so hope that Sesshoumaru’s intrigue in Sango has been piqued… nothing like a bit of sexual rivalry to spice things up… Oh my goodness… so damned good sweetpea! I loved how you had Sango schitzing out through the glass, damn crazy slayer bitch *Gawd’s I luv her!* A truly great chapter! And you are such a sweetpea, being honored by my review *shucks* You make me blush (not from hentai’d thoughts this time either!!!)

Peace to you and your ecchi muses ~_^
person Original Sinner
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey Mitsuki! Check out the crazy shit that happened in my last review! *Twilight Zone music playing for effect* I don't know what happened there... For some reason there is a line out of Lessons thrown into the mix.... *blinks repeatedly* is what I did when I posted the review and read it... Can't know what happened but adds a bit of freaky interest no? LOL

K...

Ciao!
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha ^_^... you're funny girl... no... I didn't have a typo... scrag seems to be the word of the week for me and yes, we must be the only two on the face of this earth that use it... I don't often hear anyone else use that term. Oh well, I guess that makes us pretty original then yeah? Now... on the subject of this story, very nice. I'm currently reading the same crossover by another author at the moment and am getting very sucked into the whole scrummy idea of crossing the two shows. Chapter One... very good. *toddles off to read chapter two* Thumbs up chickybabe ~_^
person Original Sinner
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd! Sango behind a glass wall on display *falls off of chair* You wanna hurry up and update this missy... what a sinfully diabolical mind we have here.... Chop, chop then... what a cliffy! Very, very good ~_^ the mind is boggling as to what is going to happen next... all these lecherous youkai appraising the displays... Hummmm... Can't wait to see what you come up with *grins evilly* You and Chigirl are sooooo naughty. I'm a convert me thinks...
person Chigirl
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! This sounds really promising! Poor Sango! Damned evil youkai! Can't wait till she meets the sexy bandit prince!!! Update soon!!!

Chigirl
person Chigirl
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like it! It's getting really good! Is her clothing black? I like to think so! Tight in certain places with high splits! Describe it! Hope Youko's coming soon! Hurry and update!