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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo your fanfic is HOT i mean wow .......continue the good.....dirty...work
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^Teehee that was such a wounderfully done story....poor inuyasha he never knows when there is a perfectly good girl infront of him...
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I want a sequel or U need to write more because that was a really good ff
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really do think you should make a sequel to this. I must say you are and excellent writter and I would be more than happy to read other stories by you. Please think about it. I know I would read the sequel if you created another, and this was fabolous for a one-shot. But, I do think it could be so much more, you know? All though it is complely up to you. So, again this would make a wonderful story, you just have to make some more chapters.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good keep it up
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic . well written,if this was your first i cant imagine what your next ones will be like, please make a sequel
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a first effort! You may wish to use a spell check or have someone edit the story for you in the future. There were some places where words were missing and where what you were trying to convey was unclear.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot Dang! *falls off of chair!* Terrific stuff for a first-timer *wows* How hot was that??? Love the sexy puppy... he's such a hottie no? Can take or leave Kagome, but you writing paired her so well...
Love the name... that's what initially drew me to this story... my mum reckons that people used to call my nana a Black Irish Rose... sheesh... can I even want to be talking about my mum or my nana after leaving a wet patch on my seat from reading this... I feel sick... *doh!* There goes the hentai rush.... *lol*
Peace,
The Sinner ~_^
Love the name... that's what initially drew me to this story... my mum reckons that people used to call my nana a Black Irish Rose... sheesh... can I even want to be talking about my mum or my nana after leaving a wet patch on my seat from reading this... I feel sick... *doh!* There goes the hentai rush.... *lol*
Peace,
The Sinner ~_^
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! I can't believe this is your first Sess/Kag fanfic!!! Iyt is unbelievable
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice.