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by MirokuTheAngel

person apassino
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was really getting into this story until it stopped all of a sudden! Are you going to finish?

Amiti
person Lil Sango
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh, huh, fun indeed! I'm waiting to have this updated soon!!!:)smiles!

person Sari
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cough*
person sango111
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please pleeeeeaaaaase

add more
person DragonKnight
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is crap if you don't add chapters. All you have right now is a premise, not a story.
person Toni
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start, can't wait to see where this goes.
person ReRe
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE !!!!!!

hick_boom_bah@yahoo.com
person LG
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow really kinky.lol
person Maddie Brown
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good cant wait to see what occurs next hehe
person demonic emo wench
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay for starters I can tell already that if you write more you will be a good story writer you just need to finish this one and make it longer so we can read it ....I can tell this has a great potential to be peoples favorites just keep writeing this one.....but....ummm....PLEASEE FINISH THIS ONE I LIKE THE SOUND OF THE WHIPS AND GAGS THING!!!!

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