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for Goodnight Lover

by AncientChineseProverb

person Badgrl74
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, he doesn't even know what she really looks like? Maybe she can wash off her makeup and run away! But what do I know, you're the writer with all the ideas! I await your next update!
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I didn't recognize the story, then you got to the part about the murdered royal family. If you are going to copy someone else's work try to mix things up a bit. The story you're copying from is Once a Princess or something like that by Johanna Lindsey or something like that.
person Airy
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I'm looking foward to reading the next one.
person Denara
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a very good chapter and i cant wait for the next chapert to see how life with seeshomaru is going to be like for kagome
person mloidl
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story up till now! Keep up the good work - I am waiting for you to continue!
person Clover
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
person ama
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girl you got this story going on. This is Awesome! Keep up the great work or I just might die!!!!!! *Just Kidding* But this is amazing work.
person Sankontesou
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really unique story...i like it!! update again soon!!!
person Airy
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person Mel
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. I figured out which book it's from. I was so excited that I started jumping up and down. It's not often that I know something other people don't. Do you want me to name the book and the author?
Update soon!