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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok, I couldnt even read it. you need to go back and fix/edit the layout. The sentences are weird and theres still formatting in the story as well
you're
sentences are like this
and
keep it up
Otherwise it looks to be a great read
you're
sentences are like this
and
keep it up
Otherwise it looks to be a great read
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the way this fic is! I didn't read this until I "gave up" on Sacrifice. Lol, I read the AN at the end and noticed you havent updated "Sacrifice" since June and I was like "Its been THAT long?!" Anyways, I hope to read future chapters on both stories! Keep it up!!
10/10
10/10
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story - I appreciate it very much when it takes quite a time for the two to grow a liking for each other - it's much more realistic that way - I have more text to look forward to reading until they finally come togehter. So please continue your excellent work!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Your story is good..when is more coming? =) keep this up and everyone will be happy.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, you didn't update for quite long. but it's okay, i hope to read more of this story. i just wonder when you'd finally convince kagome to drop the make-up. haha. make the guys drool over her! lol.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG!!! You updated! I had forgotten about this fic...........Well yay that you updated and cool story
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it great keep it going !!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is awesome i love that book you are so cool to do this it is the book johnna lis. right?
if not it's a grEAT BOOK AND STORY
if not it's a grEAT BOOK AND STORY
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I am really, really enjoying the story!!!! thank you, you rock!!!!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I like how this story is going!