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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person Bulia-chan
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this story, but never actually reviewed... wanted to say, "you rock!" I love your characterization of the characters, and cannot wait to read more. Ryuu and his seemingly dominant tendencies, InuT and his (wonderful) insanity, InuY and cute affections, and Sess just rules. Your lemons are well-written, as well as the timing for them. Like for some yaoi, it's as if the author HAS to put a lemon in every chapter, even if it really isn't necessary. And the plot is actually believable! If anyone can write a Sess-uke story, it's you. I notice that you said an update late november, but I guess those aren't very accurate, but when is it ever? Anways, fantastic job, and keep up the good work!
person SP777
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

you know what, I ACTUALLY enjoyed that Ryuu/Inutaisho interaction more than any other.
What I mean is...I like the funny moments but I like it best when they are serious with each other, even when they are intimate. Probably because Inutaisho is a Lord and Ryuu' is a fierce dragon demon and I expect them to be at least straight-forward sometimes.

you know what I mean?

Now will Sesshoumaru be straight-forward with Inuyasha..and tell him the truth before they both become too deep in each other?
person auntie C
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should update.
person Merely Truth
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww ! I didn’t see that you’d updated !! what a shame !!! Your story keep me in alert : I’ve a lot of questions whirling in my head (that’s delectable !) and especially, I ask me, why, but why Inutaisho didn’t free his mate himself ? Is he really such a coward ? Or was it for the safety of Inuyasha ?
And Sesshomaru, why didn’t he foresee the risk for Inuyasha when he decided to free Ryu ?!?! He should have been enough smart to see that !!! Grrrrr !
All that to say you that I love your plot and your Inutaisho (very special indeed), and I’ll wait with big widen eyes to read the next update.
Oh! and I present myself : I’m a french (excuse my english please !) mother of three daughters, we all like japanese mangas and animes and especially the characters of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. I give you three of my favorite stories on AFF : “In a different light” TheMaven, “Across the ages” Inuyoukai8, and “Domestication” Amber Rose. Try them, all very subtile and with a lot of very good lemons !

Thank you very much for your writing
Bons baisers de France,

Merely Truth
person SilverCrescentX (not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my oh my!!! i loved it!!!! i mean...i never read it because i thought it was fully inu seme centered but i asbolutely loved the inutaisho uke part!!! oh it was adorable please update!
person maria
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
alrite! ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person boogles
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please PLEASE write more. I am in LOVE with this story and cant get enough. This story is so so so amazing
person Raneynr Lerrqu
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I'm glad that Ryuu and Inu are making amends. How is Sess going to react to the chaos that is now his home and how is he going to react to Yasha? I look forward for the next part!!
person sessylover
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know olivia, sessylover, and betty boop are all the same person. so when you get a crazy ass, hot yaoi induces repiles from all three that just me being being a yaoi junkie. also i was thanking you could make this a four some but that would be really difficult.
person betty boop
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and just so you don't think am going soft UPDATE NOW FOR LOVE OF GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!