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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person nette
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very hot. i cant wait to read inu's turn and how sessh will act towards it. and why did sessh leave early and wat was inu going to say. all way i guess i'll find out next chapter :)
person writerfreak7
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmfao... you are brilliant, I swear... I had to sneak upstairs onto my parent's computer just to read this lemon... Goodness... My computer has that parental block thingie... even though I'm almost 18... but still... I really wanted to read this, and it was deffinetly worth it!!! Anyway, can't wait for the next update... ^.^ Until next time... see ya!
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... I could hae sworn I reviewed this fic. Geez. What a pain.

Anyway, I'm so totally in love with your story that I can't find the best words to praise you with! So I'll go with the usual words that are said.

I love this fic! I especially like this part: “However, even though you are decreed as the dominant one on this night, you will not endanger Inuyasha in any way. Take him, mark him, and mate him. If you even think of harming him irreparably, you would not even want to know what its consequences entail.”

XXD

But I'm curious... did the rest of Chapter 2 get cut off? I just seemed you started off with saying Sesshomaru's name and then... nothing... (sob). Maybe it's just my computer... :S

Anyway! I cannot wait until A) you give us some juicy details of IY and Sesshou's first encounter with Sesshou being top and B) with IY as top! Kyya! Upate soon! ^.^

(melts into a puddle of fangirl)


-DM
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Lord. My spelling is atrocious! WAH! Don't hold it against me as a fan!
person Iyasu
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! I like this!
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far cannot wait till you update.
person leyren
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
purely delicious. I liked the way you worded your story. good job.
person ying
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Em...this is good.I can't wait to see how you continue this.
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH I see how it is.. You are just leaving us hanging and leaving us at the edge of our chairs trying to figure out what is going to happen next, because you know that we can't figure it out. T.T... Your idea and the way you are starting this story ((for me atleast)) it is hard to think or figure out what might happen next, making your little lovely cliffhanger that much more annoying. But still awesome. I am still very interested in your story and I can't wait to see where you'll go with this. Well good work.
person jamie
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa,good story. This is a good start.Please update soon.Er... by the way,for some reason I want to see sesshomaru get pregnant.(Because sesshy
prettier than inuyasha.)^_^ Any way,you're doing fine.