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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you're either writing chapter 5 or done with chapter 5! lol I'm hooked and oOo! I like those pictures that you shared with us of IT and Ryuu! The artist is really good... and you should ask her if she likes Sess/Inu! Don't just assume, missy! Feh. Even if she doesn't she should be giddy at the prospect that someone was inspired by her work! Yay! (does a little dance) Update sooo~ooon! ^o^

-DM
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like your story. Good job so far!
person nette
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was nice. getting to see how inutaisho interacts with his children even though it was inu. and i liked the spin you have in here, ryuu as sesshy's father. nice one. cant wait to read the next chapter to see how inu gets his revenge so to speak. ok update soon :D
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I almost feel sorry for them, ya know? They’re not quite like the Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru that I know, yet, but it’s blatantly obvious that they’re not all cuddles and rainbows. In fact, I don’t think they ever will be. But oh man, to introduce it like that, and then for Inuyasha to show up. The taking of the hand and kissing the knuckles was great though. I loved it. ~dpa06~
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can totally see Inuyasha’s fears! Oh man, I never thought about that but I can see them now. Submitting will suck, but it will be possible. And Inuyasha’s mind was already wreaking havoc on him before his father came in with ‘words of advice’. I want to know what his father’s going to give him when he tops. That’ll be interesting to see. ~dpa06~
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm… what did that mean? He knows they are to change roles to be certain that Sesshoumaru is to be the dominant, no matter what Sesshoumaru wants. I do not think Inutaisho will be overly happy with this. Whatever. I liked it. It was everything I expected and more: Sesshoumaru was almost a complete and utter bastard, and Inuyasha submitted almost happily. It was great. ~dpa06~
person littlefiction
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good lemon. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY
person jess
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Please do write more, and soon!!!! :)
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHAHA! I love this. I like the parts where Sesshomaru is like, When I am standing, what is your place? And I absolutely love Inuyasha's answers! Especially when Sesshomaru questions him a second time and Inuyasha is unsure at first, thinking he said the wrong thing and Sesshomaru is all rwor! And Inuyasha is like, UNDERNEATH YOU!

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Sorry, now I'm hyper off of your story! Muwha! Great job! I cannot WAIT until we see how Inuyasha's night goes!


-DM