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his father seems to think he is a uke as well. good. for a moment there i thought you might commit an act of treason and make sess the uke. that would be so oc that it isn't funny. i think the only person he'd be uke to would be his father who is more powerful.

i really hope their father isn't cheating and making sure inu gets to be the seme because that would really piss me off. i know for a fact that sess would rather die then be submissent since he never submits to anyone. kust because their father did doesn't mean he would. inu is a better uke anyway.

using that powder is cheating! this sucks! sesshoumaru is the dominant one! even in the show inuyasha seems submissive! i hope sesshoumaru kicks his ass! plus bitch slaps his father!

hey awesome chapter. update next chapter soon.

Lessee, where to begin...

I think my favorite part is when Sesshomaru's playing with himself in the beginning... that's... well, that's just really hot. I hope to aspire to writing sex/teasing scenes like you some day! (big, sparkly eyes)

Mmm. Oo! Also, I lovelovelove when Inuyasha gets a burst of confidence from his father! And oo, I like when Sesshomaru says/thinks at the end that he doesn't blame Inuyasha and that a certain /someone else/ gets that honor. Oooooh, InuTaishou is in so much trouble!

And I also like (understatement, I love this-) when Sesshomaru goes into the stages of "pre-transformation." At first I didn't understand what you meant but then I got it and was like... Holy crap, she's fucking brilliant.

So yes, now you officially have me friggin hooked on this story and I hope to see loads more sex, loads more teasing/masturbating (can I say that on here?), loads more of Sesshomaru playing with himself, loads of jealousy and flying horomones, and, did I mention loads more of Sesshomaru playing with himself...? No? Well, let me say it again, I want to see loads more of Sesshomaru playing with himself. ^.^ It's like Christmas! Candycandycandy! Yay!

And damn, your beta, man, she so rocks! Is she really fast and (gasp) good? Man! I wanna try that out! (gasps again) Wait! That's me! No no no! X_X

Ahaha, can't wait for your next update!


-DM

I love this story and you are a great writer. That last chapter though was really hard to read. I just wanted to kill Inutaisho. Anyway, love your story and update soon!

definitely good! so kind inuyasha!

wow that was great... i hope sesshomaru does not try to kill his father... but who is the dom.... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Oh, I like this version much better. To be honest, the editted version felt a little too intensely rape-ish for me. It was good, but not for me, you know? tortured with the knowlege that he's enjoying that is wonderful. It's always sad to have to edit out the best parts. It's in the edited version, that he likes it, but it just says it, doesn't show it, and it just doesn't work as well. Not your fault though, since the parts that show it had to be edited out.

Very good story as of now. I enjoy reading it, it has a good plot and very creative. I honestly can say I have only read two stories that contain InuYasha as the dominate one. I do like Sesshoumaru dominate but having both of them is just fabulous. My favorite thing about this story is the fact that InuTashio is so funny. I laughed so much he is such a character. Well when you write a story with him. Anyways, love the story can’t wait for the next update. Seriously, please update soon I don’t think I can hold out. PLEASE