rate_review Reviews

Wow. Well-done. I must say that I'm not surprised at Sesshomaru's actions. Even though his father betrothed him and his brother, he was essentially raped and forced to carry those children that were conceived from that rape. It was a harsh thing to do, but definitely in character for our favorite demon lord.

Toga's an ass sometimes, and this chapter shows it. His story about Ryuukotsusei was very telling and indicative of his relationships with his sons. He cast aside Ryuu for Izayoi in a similar manner that he cast aside Sesshomaru for Inuyasha. It's no wonder that Sesshomaru did what he did.

Granted, Inuyasha would be hurt if he found out what happened to his pups, but he can't honestly be surprised. He forced himself upon his brother with his father's blessing--using poison--so he can't expect too much out of his brother. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

You have no idea how mental I was going to see Sesshomaru's reaction to Inuyasha and the poisen! But now that I have (And even though I already knew the outcome)... Oh, my heart aches for Sesshomaru! He's too proud and unforgiving and assy for his own good... But I must admit, I'd have reacted in the same way had I had to deal with my father being 'killed' by my other father and carrying a baby of the person that caused the rift between those mentioned fathers... I can't help but think Inutaisho as a lovable bastard sometimes...

Just wondering, is Ryuu going to be released from the cliff? Maybe Inuyasha feels angry about his father's actions or something and releases him... *crosses fingers* He'd cause more trouble than Sesshomaru did in this chapter!

Anyway, enough of my rambling... Great work, and I'll be back to review the next chapter... ^_^

- DF

please say he did not do what i think
he did? he did didn't he? will inuyasha
find out? what will he do? i wish you
hadn't stop there or there was another
chapter. i'm dying to find out what
happens next.

that is extremely messed up. hopefully sesshomaru wil soon see the wrong that he has done. poor inutaisho. looking foward to your next update.

I like this chappy. if I ever found the story alert button. So I'll know you udated I'll do it. untill then. off to the hunt. I rate a 5. cause it has my hubby in it. sesshy kun!
sess: WTF I'm not your hubby
me: remmber ebay
sess: *blush* I hate that site
Me: look at all your childrens *hold dozens of sesshy plushi*
sess: 0o NOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo!!!~!

I absolutely love this fic!! Hope you continue with it. :)

Great fic; I love what you have going thus far!
I like that both charas have been seme and uke, but...who's preg?! Can't wait to find out! :D *hopes it's Sess*

if this was canon and sesshomaru ended up being the uke he would DEFINITLY kill himself!

the way inu questioned himself about being a good mate definitly makes him uke because otherwise he would have thought more dominating things. besides the only place for sess is on top. he isn't one to be bitched for certain.

inu certainly acts like a uke which i prefer