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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person Demitria Miriam
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Praise to you who has yaoi-anime-watching-lovers! (to any other reviewer who doesn't get this, just be jealous).

I love you! Write the next chapter now! Now! Now! Now!



-DM
person memorietrail
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no you can't stop there.more please!!
person previously_recorded
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh that was sad :( though I can understand it...I just can't see Sesshomaru as the uke of the relationship you know?
Your writing is very good, and hopefully you continue soon. good job!
person Kistia
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Absolutly freaking LOVED it.
person khryssie
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, for the most part, i likes it, i like how the mating rituals work and all that, and the fact that "daddy" is a bit off his rocker...heehee...
person nette
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dang man, did u hav to have sesshy do that. i mean i understand his feelings towards being the submissive one and beign pregnant but did he have to kill the pup. it didn't do anything wrong. man, inutaisho sure has a lot of weight on his person. i feel bad that all he's trying to do is make things a bit wasier for his sons, but it always seems to backfire. i hope things get better for the inu clan, i dont think i can handle another innocent life being hurt. but it was a good chapter. so update soon.
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It makaaes you want to cry. The baby is the innocent in all of this he/she paid the ultimate price. But I know you have to look at the whole picture to see that everyone is hurting in some shape or form. I would like to see what will happen to Sess and Inu's relationship when the true is known.
person Silence
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. That had to hurt. Well, I guess Sesshoumaru just proved to his father he doesn't have the same family instincts if he could throw away his firstborn like that. You're right, that was a dark chapter. But you're also right that things have to be bad before they can be good. I just really, really hope things get good in this, 'cause poor Inuyasha is not going to be happy.

This story is so orginal because of the risks you're taking with it. I always have trouble with uke Sesshoumaru 'cause he just so masculine, but I have to say I love this story. It is believably accurate to the character's canon personalities and yet it is not a carbon copy of all the other engagement fics. Not to mention, it is beautifully written and full of heartbreaking angst. Thank you for this addition to the Inucest fandom.

~Silence~
person acr
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person angel
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ..how could he do that .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel