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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person BlackTea
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like how you are changing the story line up from the normal one-its very interesting and really captures one's attention and holds it! I would love to see Ryuu come back to life in the story. Anyway keep up the great story- I can't wait to continue reading it. Remember to update alot!
person Tachi
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack...Chapter6 hurt...but this was a good one. Ack...3am...and time for bed...night and good writtings. Cant wait to read more!
person angel
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. will inuyasha ever find out about the pup... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person howlandsgirl
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! Please update soon!!!
person nette
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved this chapter. its about time sesshy started showing some kind of emotion towards inu, even if it is a bit subtle. i'm glad things are starting to work out. i liked the little flashback of a mini sessh, he was so cute, 'bwuder' too adorable. i hope the dinner goes well and i hope things between inutaisho/sessh work out. keep up the good writing. cant wait to read more.
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ee!!! I love this chapter! I my stomach is in knots right now. I want to know if Sesshoumaru will tell Inuyasha about what happened. Well I can't wait for more. ^__^
person Ann
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So basically what you're saying is that the conceited bastard was the pregnant one but he killed the child? I like that, mostly. Sesshomaru's ego is bigger than his full inu-youkai form. It's nice to see that arrogant, son of a bitch brought to heel. However it seems like he was so threatened by the possibility of becoming uke for the rest of his mating that he killed his concieved child. But I'm glad that the seme seems to be Inuyasha, because Sesshomaru would have made him pay dearly for the night Inuyasha spent as seme in the initial mating stages. I'm OK with Sesshomaru being seme, but not when he's some stuck-up asshole who wants his uke to roll over and submit like some bitch. Your Sesshomaru really is some piece of work. I hope that if I'm mistaken and Sesshomaru really does end up as seme, that he will show mercy and respect towards Inuyasha.
person Raneynr Lerrqu
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing and I can't wait to see how the diner goes! Keep up the good work!!!
person Em
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why on earth would you be afraid to post? I am really enjoying your story and it is the first one I check for to see if it's been updated. Keep it up! I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
person Mamimi
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay ,update!! i liked this chap.! i really hope things turn out the way Sess was thinking that would be great!!!cant wait for more!