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wow that was great ...now that he is free inutaisho will be ever ever ever surprised to see him ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Please update soon ^_^

Quite unique story you have. :P I actually like your idea for this one.. though why must Sesshoumaru be so stubborn? I also like the whole "world" of this story, even those weird rituals and such.

I liked this mood much better. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

im so disappointed in sesshoumaru!! how the hell can someone kill their own child?!?!!? the horrible bastard!! even though it was a great sadness, i still whole heartedly enjoyed everything that happened ^_^ and the little memorty with InuT, Ryuu and Sess. i really want to see Ryuuu released and see what goes on between him and Inu T... I LOVE YOUR LEMONS!!! okay... i'll stop rambling and hope you can quickly update ch. 8!! best of luck and ganbatte!!

Hey, I just read the story and I have to say it has to be one of my favorite fics of all time. Its unique and well written with a cool twist to the characters! It was just as I was finishing chapter 6 that I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while; are you going to continue with teh story? I hope so! Your writing it so well! I want to see where you take this and if Ryuu makes a appearance at all.

I love. love. LOVE! this story. don't br afraid. write more quickly! plz! you cna't leave us hanging!

I loved the story and would really like to see when Sess father is releaed from his cliff..
When will you get to that part of the story..Also, i don't really like Inu/Sess'z father..He
was the one who cheated, literally by wanting Inu mother etc...What right does he have by doing
what he does to Sess father..plus also Sess..I hope he gets what he deserves when his mate is released
by him, if he has the guts to do so...Also, i just can't pic Sess being the bottom or the one carrying the
baby or a baby, so, eventhou he got rid of his child, it shouldn't have ever exited becuz, if it wasn't for
what their father did or gave Inu, you know, Sess will NEVER be the bottom or the one carrying a baby...

“Weally?” Sesshomaru couldn’t hold his composure any longer. “Cool!” He began to skip around in a circle, grinning crazily.

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I can so see Sesshomaru all happy and innocent! And it's an adorable image... ^_^ Though I'd hate for Inuyasha to find out about Sesshomaru and the kid, I know he'll eventually find out... He has too... In my mind anyway... And if he doesn't I will not forgive Sesshomaru! I don't care if he holds his pride and pure blood so dear to him, he can't kill an infant, born or not like he did!

Well... Now that I've ranted... Great work... ^_^ I have to say, I love how your Sesshomaru's mind works... And the kind of personality you gave Inutaisho... Again, great work...

- DF

Okay I give...what is it that involves ''a potato, a hammock, a mirror and six lit candle sticks?'' O_O

I must say, I'm enjoying this story basically because of the humor that is splashed
here & there in the story.

It doesn't hurt to balance angst with humor, cuts down on the cringe factor that
engulfs a story.

Now who is going to tell Inuyasha about the unborn pup?