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for Topsy Turvy

by VixenArgentum

person DrawFire
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Truth be told, I expected Ryuu to come back enraged... But I'm glad to see that it was Sesshomaru who brought him back... The part where Ryuu went to reach for Sesshomaru was gorgeous! I loved it! Probably because I doubt many others would... But yes! I loved this update! Except the beginning, that was near heart wrenching and was painful to read...

I'll be back!

- DF
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh you're so evil, how could you just end it there?? damn that was great, i love it. i hope things work out between the bros, i love seeing them together. more soon, please?
person Amelia
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TOO GOOD TOO GOOD TOO GOOD!!! PPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE!!! IT'S TOO GOOD!!! damn shesshy... he's such a mean bastard... BUT I STILL LOVERS HIM!!! please update soon!!
person thedah
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww.. sesshoumaru is a bit mean.. XD To wake his sire.. I bet Inutaisho will be suprised.. :P Wonderfull chapter.
person jess
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update really really fast cause i NEED to know what happens next
person Silence
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. This story is wonderful. Poor Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru had the right idea not to hide behind lies even though it would have hurt the little hanyou. But then he chickened out. Inuyasha needs to know before he finds out in a worse way. And now Daddy has a surprise coming. I'm actually looking forward to that 'cause somehow I don't think its gonna turn out quite as badly as Taisho and Sesshy expect. Personally, I always thought the Ryuu/InuT relationship was weird but you breathe a wonderful life into it. I actually look forward to the flashbacks just as much as the story itself.

Thanx
~Silence~
person acr
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I have too tell you, maypoles were originally pretty carnal anyway!
person nette
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay i'm lgad to see you have updated. that sesshy is a real piece of work. forst klilling their unborn pup, then lying about it saying it was an accident and now he unleashed ryuu or 'sire'. i can't wait to see inutausho's reaction to this and hwta inu will think when he meets sesshy's other father face to face. anyway good job writing this chapter and update soon. :)
person Princess Sin
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is i wish you had
another chapter up instead of just
the one.
person Ally-Chan
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah! that was aweswome!!! pooor Inuyasha..he's so in the dark about everything man. haha and oooooh buddy! Inutaisho is in for some serious sheeyat when his mate gets home. i hope he doesnt hold any malice towards inuyasha...that would suck. but update sooon i love this story!!! its so great!!